Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing (e.g., "very very huge", "for future"). Use accurate tense and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I did — I had a bike when I was about seven. It was actually too big for me at the time, because my parents bought it hoping I would grow into it. However, I still used it a lot to ride around the neighborhood and learn to balance.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then support with clear, specific reasons and correct vocabulary. Use linking words (for example, "because", "also") and correct collocations ("ride a bike", "bike-sharing"). Fix tense and word order mistakes.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. For example, I often see many people riding bikes in the city, and we also have a bike-sharing system in my town, which makes cycling convenient for short trips.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

No correction needed. Sentence correctly uses the past tense to describe a past possession and the time expression 'when I was a child.'

× It was a very very huge bike for me because I was very little for it.

✓ It was a very, very huge bike for me because I was too small for it.

Two issues: repetition and incorrect preposition/word choice. 'Very very' is acceptable in speech but should be 'very, very' in writing; however better phrasing is 'too small for it' rather than 'very little for it.' This is an article/word choice and preposition problem classified here as article errors since 'for it' is unnatural. Suggest using 'too small for it' to express inability to use the bike due to size. Suggestion: Use 'too + adjective' to indicate excess (too small), and include a comma when repeating 'very' in writing.

× I think that my parents bought it for future.

✓ I think that my parents bought it for the future.

The phrase 'for future' is missing the definite article 'the.' English requires 'the future' when speaking generally about a time to come. Also, common phrasing is 'for the future' or 'for my future' depending on meaning. Suggest using 'for the future' to sound natural.

× But I used it.

✓ But I used it a lot.

The original sentence is grammatical but short and slightly awkward. Adding an adverb or phrase ('a lot') clarifies the meaning that the student actually used the bike often. Classified as sentence structure improvement to make the answer more natural.

× I think so because nowadays I saw I've seen a lot of people who drive a bike and we have kicks sharing of bikes in my town

✓ I think so because nowadays I have seen a lot of people who ride bikes, and we have bike sharing in my town.

Multiple tense and word-choice errors: 'nowadays' requires present perfect ('I have seen') to link past observations to the present. 'Saw' is simple past and conflicts with 'nowadays.' 'Drive a bike' is incorrect collocation in English; we 'ride' a bike. 'Kicks sharing of bikes' is incorrect word order and vocabulary; correct term is 'bike sharing' or 'bike-sharing.' Also change 'a lot of people who ride bikes' (plural) for natural expression. Suggest using present perfect with 'nowadays' and correct verbs and noun order.