Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct but too short and lacks supporting details. To improve, give a concise topic sentence then add 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., when you got it, how often you used it, who taught you). Use a linking word if you add more than one detail. Keep it natural and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my eighth birthday and rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, which helped me become confident cycling. Also, my older brother taught me how to balance and pedal safely.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is fragmented and contains a grammatical error and a jump in thought. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, a reason with a complete clause, and a specific example or consequence. Use linking words such as 'because', 'so', or 'for example' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people find cars and public transport costly. For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances to save money and avoid traffic, so cycling has become a common, practical choice.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because. Automobiles are expensive.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because automobiles are expensive.

The original response contains a sentence fragment caused by an incorrect period after 'because'. 'Because' introduces a subordinate clause and must be followed by its reason, not ended with a period. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correction: combine the two parts into one sentence so the reason follows 'because'. Suggestion: when using 'because', directly provide the reason without inserting a period; e.g., 'because automobiles are expensive.'