Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn về cấu trúc và ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và tiếng thắp. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (số nhiều/ít, thì), sử dụng từ nối đơn giản như “because” hoặc “so” để làm câu mạch lạc, và giới hạn độ dài không quá 5 câu. Ví dụ cụ thể: nêu tuổi, ai tặng/sửa, khi nào và một kỉ niệm ngắn.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was about seven, my father fixed my older sister’s bike for me so I could start learning to ride. I used to practice in the park near our house every weekend and I remember falling a few times but getting better quickly.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cùng với ý không mạch lạc. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời “Yes” hoặc “No”, sau đó giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể và dùng từ nối (for example, because, however). Tránh từ không chính xác hoặc phát âm yếu như “spike” — dùng từ đúng như “motorbike” hoặc “car”. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu rõ ràng.

Exemplo: Not really. In my city most people prefer motorcycles or cars because they are faster and more convenient for commuting. For example, during rush hour it would take much longer to travel by bike than by motorbike.

× Yes, definitely uh, when I was around 7 years olds, uh, my father, umm repair my your older sister's bike to forward for me to ride and I remember that I usually.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I was around 7 years old, my father repaired my older sister's bike for me to ride and I remember that I usually rode it.

Errors: '7 years olds' should be '7 years old' (singular after a number used as an age). 'repair' is past tense context so must be 'repaired' (past tense issue but also subject-verb agreement). 'my your older sister's bike' is a pronoun error; choose 'my older sister's bike'. 'to forward for me to ride' is incorrect phrasing; use 'for me to ride'. 'I usually.' is a sentence fragment; complete to 'I usually rode it.' Suggestions: use correct singular form for age, use past tense verbs for past events, remove conflicting possessive pronouns, and complete fragments by adding an object and verb.

× I don't think so, uh, because there are many people have multiple to, uh, ride to work or a traveler is faster than bike, which is faster than spike and uh, easy to rise.

✓ I don't think so, because many people have multiple options to ride to work, and traveling by car is faster than biking, which is faster than walking and easier to ride.

Errors: 'there are many people have' should be 'many people have' (remove unnecessary 'there are'). 'have multiple to' is incomplete; use 'have multiple options' (quantifier/word choice). 'a traveler is faster than bike' is unclear and uses incorrect nouns/pronouns; replace with 'traveling by car is faster than biking'. 'spike' is wrong word for 'walking' or 'bike'? context suggests 'walking'; corrected to 'walking'. 'easy to rise' uses wrong word 'rise' and misplaced adjective; use 'easier to ride'. Suggestions: remove redundant 'there are', use correct nouns for modes of transport, choose appropriate comparative forms ('faster', 'easier'), and ensure verbs match nouns (ride vs rise).