Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense and vocabulary, remove repetitions, and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Mention where you rode, why it was memorable, and how you felt using precise words (e.g., "wobbled" not "wobble"). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my village in Dubai. Because the bike was slightly too big for me, I often wobbled and laughed with my friends, which made those afternoons very fun and memorable.

Sugestão: Organize your answer with a clear opinion first, then give specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Use accurate vocabulary: say "public transport" or "cars" instead of unclear terms. Give one or two concrete examples (commuting habits, infrastructure). Keep sentences short and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transport for commuting. Also, there is limited cycling infrastructure in many areas, so few people choose to ride bikes to work or school.

× Yes I did. I I used to have a small bicycle when I was scared and the most of the time I was driving around the sit around the Dubai village and it was funny because the bicycle was big to me and and so I often wobble and laugh with my friends.

✓ Yes, I did. I used to have a small bicycle when I was a child and most of the time I rode around the village in Dubai. It was funny because the bicycle was too big for me, so I often wobbled and laughed with my friends.

Past tense issue: The original sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect forms (e.g. 'was scared' instead of 'a child', 'was driving' and 'sit around' are wrong). Use past simple for habitual past actions: 'used to have' and 'rode'. Use past simple for actions: 'wobbled' and 'laughed'. Replace 'was scared' with 'was a child' to convey age; 'big to me' -> 'too big for me'. Suggestions: keep consistent past tense and use correct verb forms and prepositions (ride around the village, too big for me).

× No, because my home can't tell you most of the people use by passage and carries to go from homes to their village of work.

✓ No, because in my hometown most people use public transport and cars to travel from their homes to their workplaces.

Incorrect use of prepositions and word choice: 'my home can't tell you' is ungrammatical and 'use by passage and carries' is incorrect. Use 'in my hometown' for location, 'use public transport and cars' for means of transport, and 'travel from their homes to their workplaces' for movement and destination. Maintain present simple for general facts.

× And it's really that's rare to see people getting their bicycles for more to their work spaces as that many of them don't have bicycles or or any or any they don't have that passage.

✓ It is really rare to see people using bicycles to commute to work because many of them do not own bicycles or do not have access to them.

Sentence structure errors: The original sentence is repetitive and unclear ('for more to their work spaces', 'or or any or any they don't have that passage'). Recast sentence clearly: use 'rare to see people using bicycles to commute to work' and explain reason with 'because many of them do not own bicycles or do not have access to them.' Use present simple for general statements and avoid repetition.