Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (tense and articles) and remove repetition. Focus on natural phrasing (e.g., “one of my favourite hobbies” not repeating).

Exemplo: Yes — I did. Cycling was one of my favourite hobbies as a child. For example, I often rode different types of bikes with friends around our neighbourhood, and when our parents allowed us we would explore farther afield to discover new places.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct opinion, then support it with specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, word choice) and avoid vague phrases. Mention examples or comparisons (e.g., age groups, urban vs rural).

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For instance, many elderly people and children ride bikes for short trips, and more adults use them for exercise or commuting. However, car ownership is increasing, so bicycles are still more common in parks and city centres than for long-distance travel.

× Yes I did. I had many different types of bikes and it was my favorite hobby to It was one of my favorite hobbies.

✓ Yes, I did. I had many different types of bikes, and riding them was one of my favorite hobbies.

The original contains awkward phrasing and a fragment ('it was my favorite hobby to'). The correct form uses a gerund 'riding' to name the activity and joins clauses with a comma and 'and' to create a complete, grammatical sentence. Use consistent past tense 'had' and 'was'. Suggestion: avoid repeating ideas and ensure each clause has a subject and verb. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Riding a bike with my friends in nearby neighborhood to discover different places and if our mothers, our parents let us so we could go further more and we could discover more places.

✓ I used to ride bikes with my friends in the nearby neighborhood to discover different places, and if our parents let us, we could go further and explore more areas.

The sentence is a fragment and has incorrect structure. Use 'I used to ride' to indicate a habitual past action and 'nearby neighborhood' needs the definite article 'the'. 'If our parents let us' is the correct conditional clause; 'further more' is incorrect — use 'further' or 'more'. Replace repetitive 'discover more places' with 'explore more areas' to avoid redundancy. Ensure a clear subject and verb for a complete sentence. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes there are. There are many different kinds of bicycles using by people, elderly people, minor kids today as we can see on the street.

✓ Yes, they are. There are many different kinds of bicycles used by people, including elderly people and young children, as we can see on the street today.

'Yes there are' is unnatural in response to 'Do you think bikes are popular?' — 'Yes, they are' is appropriate. 'Using by people' is incorrect passive voice formation; use 'used by people'. 'Minor kids' is incorrect word choice; use 'young children' or 'children'. Add commas and 'including' to list examples. Place 'today' at the end for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:3

× But it is more common as a healthy transportation.

✓ But it is more commonly used as a healthy form of transportation.

The phrase 'common as' is incorrect here. Use the adverb 'commonly' to modify 'used' and include 'form of' before 'transportation' for natural collocation. This makes the sentence grammatical and idiomatic. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Everyone is using their cars making their thing easier.

✓ Everyone uses their cars to make things easier for themselves.

Present continuous 'is using' is less natural for habitual actions; use simple present 'uses'. 'Making their thing easier' is ungrammatical and vague; rephrase to 'to make things easier for themselves'. Use reflexive structure 'for themselves' to clarify the subject. Note: singular 'everyone' with plural 'their' is acceptable in informal modern English; if formal, use 'his or her'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× But such as.

✓ (Remove sentence)

'But such as.' is an incomplete fragment with no clear meaning or object. It should be removed or completed with examples, e.g., 'But such examples are rare.' To fix, either finish the comparative idea or delete the fragment to maintain coherence. Grammar problem type ID:26