Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha doğal ve düzgün bir yapıda verilmelidir. Tek cümlede konuya doğrudan yanıt verin, ardından 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Tekrarlardan ("I I"), eksik veya tamamlanmamış cümlelerden kaçının. Bağlaçlar veya zaman ifadeleri kullanarak anlatımı akıcı hale getirin. Örneğin geçmiş alışkanlıklardan bahsederken 'used to' veya 'when I was a child' gibi ifadeleri doğru kullanın. Ayrıca son cümlenin tamamlanmamış olduğu görülüyor; düşüncenizi tam bir cümleyle bitirin.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I used to have a small bicycle that I often rode in front of my garden because we lived in a large house with a quiet street. I especially remember riding with my friends every afternoon during the summer, which felt very free and fun.

Sugestão: Cevap daha açık ve mantıklı bir yapı ile verilmelidir. Önce genel görüşünüzü açıkça ifade edin, sonra sebep ve örneklerle destekleyin. Belirsiz ifadeler ve çelişkili kelime dizimlerinden kaçının (ör. "not all the place in some place"). Ayrıca cümlenizi tamamlayın ve bağlaçlar (because, although, however) ile nedenleri mantıklı sırayla bağlayın. Spesifik bilgiler verin: kimler bisiklet sürüyor, hangi bölgelerde popüler vs.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular among children in my country, especially in suburban and rural areas. However, they are less common in busy city centres because many parents worry about traffic safety. If there were more bike lanes and safe parks, I believe even more families would encourage cycling.

× Yes, of course. When I was a child I I was having a bike and I was riding a bike in front of my garden and we have a big house. Riding a bike is.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child I had a bike and I rode it in front of my garden, and we had a big house. Riding a bike was fun.

The original uses continuous forms incorrectly for habitual past actions. Use simple past (had, rode, had) for completed or habitual actions in the past. Also remove the duplicated 'I' and complete the fragment 'Riding a bike is' to 'Riding a bike was fun' to match past context. Suggestion: use simple past for childhood habits and ensure sentences are complete.

× Yeah, of course between children riding a bike is quite popular, but not all the place in some place.

✓ Yeah, of course, riding bikes is quite popular among children, but not everywhere.

The phrase has awkward present-tense noun phrases and preposition use. Use 'riding bikes is quite popular among children' for a general present habit. Replace 'not all the place in some place' with 'not everywhere' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'among' for groups and concise adverbial phrases like 'not everywhere'.

× Not because all most of parents thinking bike is dangerous for the children, because if you have a safe place to.

✓ Not because most parents think bikes are dangerous for children; rather, they worry if there is no safe place to ride.

Problems: 'all most of parents' should be 'most parents' (quantifier error), 'thinking' should be simple present 'think' for general statements, 'bike is dangerous for the children' should be plural 'bikes are dangerous for children', and the clause 'because if you have a safe place to' is incomplete. The correction fixes quantifier, verb form, plural agreement, and completes the idea using 'if there is no safe place to ride'. Suggestion: use 'most parents think' for general beliefs and complete conditional clauses.