Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more clearly and organize your answer: start with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and grammatical errors (use past tense consistently). Keep it under 3–4 short sentences. For example, say when you got the bike, who helped you, and one specific challenge or result.

Exemplo: Yes. I got my first bike when I was five. My father helped me learn to ride by holding the seat at first, and after about three months I could ride without the training wheels. It was difficult at first, but I felt proud when I finally managed it.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, however, because, so) and correct vocabulary (rural, urban, common, transportation). Avoid unclear words and grammatical mistakes. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In rural areas many people use bicycles because they are cheap and practical, while in urban areas people prefer motorbikes or cars for longer distances. For example, farmers often ride bikes to local markets because it is affordable and convenient.

× Yeah, uh, I got it back when I was 5, which is, uh, with assistant wheel when I was turn a, my dad practice me, uh, teach me how to buy one without a since the wheel and it's take me to 3 months to get it. That's really hard and.

✓ Yes. I got it when I was five. I started with training wheels and my dad helped me and taught me how to ride without the training wheels. It took me about three months to learn. It was really hard.

Multiple sentence structure problems: run-on sentence, incorrect word choice (assistant wheel -> training wheels), incorrect verb forms (turn a, practice me, buy one without a since the wheel), wrong tense and subject-verb agreement (it's take me -> it took me). To improve, break the long run-on into clear short sentences, use correct vocabulary (training wheels, ride), use past tense consistently for past events (got, helped, taught, took, learned), and ensure verbs agree with subjects. Practice rewriting complex spoken utterances as simple past declarative sentences. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yeah, but I think spies more people are in rural state than Arburn State which is still the lobbying transportation and also like country currencies and that's really used to everyone in his bike.

✓ Yes, but I think bikes are more common in rural areas than in urban areas. Bicycles are still a main means of transportation in the countryside, and many people there are used to riding bikes.

This sentence has incorrect word choice and adjective/adverb misuse (spies->bikes, Arburn->urban, lobbying transportation->main means of transportation, country currencies->countryside). Also incorrect pronoun usage (everyone in his bike). To improve, choose accurate lexical items, use plural/singular appropriately (rural areas), and use proper collocations (common, mean(s) of transportation, used to riding). Rewrite the idea clearly: contrast rural and urban usage and keep consistent noun forms. Grammar problem type ID:13