Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: You answered directly and gave relevant details, but there are issues with word choice, minor repetition, and a brief grammatical error. Improve by using precise vocabulary (e.g., “borrow” not “writing”), avoid repeating similar ideas, and keep sentences concise (max 4–5). Also add a linking word to connect sentences smoothly.

Exemplo: I didn’t have my own bike as a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, our neighbors often let us borrow theirs after school, so I still enjoyed riding with friends. As a result, I learned to ride early and made many happy memories.

Sugestão: Your response is relevant and contains reasons, but watch capitalization errors, some awkward phrasing (“adopted a healthier lifestyle” is fine but say how that led to cycling), and minor redundancy (“most people” repeated). Use linking words to make the cause–effect clearer and provide one concrete example to be more specific.

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people find them more affordable than cars, and since the pandemic more have chosen cycling for exercise and short commutes. For example, cities now have more bike lanes and I often see people cycling to work or to the market.

× But even though I didn't grow up having one for myself, our neighbors were very generous to let us borrow theirs sometimes after school, so we had fun writing bikes sometimes.

✓ But even though I didn't grow up having one myself, our neighbors were very generous and let us borrow theirs sometimes after school, so we had fun riding bikes sometimes.

The sentence contains a typo and awkward structure. 'Writing bikes' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'riding' (present participle) which matches the past-tense context. Also 'to let us borrow theirs' is okay but 'and let us borrow theirs' is more natural. Replace 'having one for myself' with 'having one myself' for conciseness. Suggestion: use 'riding' for the activity and simplify 'having one myself.' Grammar problem type ID:5

× Most people could easily afford owning a bike rather than purchasing a car.

✓ Most people can easily afford to own a bike rather than purchase a car.

The modal/tense and verb forms are awkward. 'Could' implies conditional or past ability; use 'can' to state a general present truth. 'Afford owning' is unidiomatic; use 'afford to own' or 'afford owning' rarely. Also parallel structure favors 'own a bike rather than purchase a car.' Suggestion: use 'can afford to own' and keep parallel verb forms. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Right after COVID, most people adopted A healthier lifestyle, so most people tend to use bicycles for commute or for leisure rides.

✓ Right after COVID, most people adopted a healthier lifestyle, so they tend to use bicycles for commuting or for leisure rides.

Problems: 'A' is incorrectly capitalized; article usage requires lowercase 'a.' Repeating 'most people' twice is stylistically poor; replace the second with 'they.' 'Use bicycles for commute' is ungrammatical—use the gerund 'commuting' or phrase 'to commute.' Also maintain tense consistency: 'adopted' (past) followed by 'tend' (present) is acceptable if stating a continuing habit, but clarify with 'they tend' to improve flow. Suggestion: use 'a healthier lifestyle,' avoid repetition, and use 'commuting.' Grammar problem type ID:26