Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct but very brief and repetitive. To improve, give a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike, how you used it, a memorable moment). Use a linking word to connect the ideas and keep the total to under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents lived nearby, they would often come with me to the park, which helped me become more confident and independent.

Sugestão: The answer responds to the question but has grammar errors and lacks detail. Improve by correcting grammar, giving a reason or comparison, and using a linking word to expand your point (for example, mention who else uses bikes or why they are popular). Keep responses natural and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular, especially among schoolchildren. In addition, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and cycling is also encouraged in some cities to reduce traffic.

× Yes, school going children uses bikes mostly.

✓ Yes, school-going children mostly use bikes.

The subject 'school-going children' is plural, so the verb must be plural too. The original uses 'uses' which is third person singular and incorrect. Also hyphenate 'school-going' as a compound adjective and place 'mostly' before the verb for natural adverb placement. Suggestion: match plural subject with base verb form 'use' and write 'school-going children mostly use bikes.'