Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve clarity, fluency, and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating words, use a linking phrase to add a reason, and choose more precise vocabulary (for example, use "congesting the roads" or "filling the streets" instead of "jamming"). Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences and add a specific example or brief reason to support your statement.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, I see hundreds of bicycles parked near schools and markets every morning, which suggests many people use them for commuting. Because of this high usage, some streets become congested during rush hour.

× Yes, I think that bikes are quite popular in my country 'cause I see a lot of bikes around everywhere and they're quite jamming the roads.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are quite popular in my country because I see a lot of bikes everywhere and they often jam the roads.

The use of the informal contraction 'cause is not appropriate in a formal answer; replace with 'because' (Grammar problem type ID 16). 'Around everywhere' is redundant; use 'everywhere' (Grammar problem type ID 26: sentence structure/redundancy). 'They're quite jamming the roads' uses incorrect verb form and word order; 'jam' is a verb requiring simple present for habitual action and 'quite' is awkward here—use 'they often jam the roads' to express habitual congestion (Grammar problem type ID 6: present tense issue and ID 8: verb + -ing form). Overall suggestions: avoid informal contractions in test responses, remove redundant words, and use simple present for habitual actions.