Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a brief linking phrase. Avoid awkward grammar (use past simple) and redundancy.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried about road safety, so they preferred I walk or use public transport. As a result, I only learned to cycle later in my teens.

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and use linking words to structure reasons. Avoid repeating phrases (e.g., "age group") and vary vocabulary. Provide one specific example or statistic if possible.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular, especially among 15–25-year-olds, because they are affordable and convenient for commuting to college. For instance, many students prefer motorbikes for short trips and to save on fuel and parking costs.

× I did not have a bike when I was a child because parents are very much skeptical about safety, so this is the reason I was not having a bike.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents were very concerned about safety, so I did not have a bike.

The sentence mixes simple past ('did not have') with a nonstandard past continuous 'was not having'. Use simple past consistently for past facts. 'Parents' needs a possessive determiner 'my' to show whose parents. 'Were very much skeptical about' is awkward; 'were very concerned about' is more natural. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past states and include necessary possessive determiners.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country for the age group of 15 to 25 age group because bikes are mostly affordable and convenient for the college students and for the school going students.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country among the 15 to 25 age group because they are mostly affordable and convenient for college and school students.

Redundant phrase 'age group of 15 to 25 age group' should be simplified to '15 to 25 age group'. Repeated 'bikes' and article use is awkward; use pronoun 'they' to avoid repetition. 'The college students' and 'the school going students' incorrectly use definite article; in general statements omit 'the' and hyphenate 'school-going'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'they are' matches plural 'bikes'. Suggestion: simplify phrases, use pronouns to avoid repetition, and remove unnecessary articles.