Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify tense and word order, use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (possessive, article, relative clause) and keep within 3–4 concise sentences. Add a specific detail (who gave it, when, and a brief memory) using linking words like “and” or “so”.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My older brother gave it to me for my fourth birthday, and I rode it every day in our neighborhood. I remember learning to balance on the sidewalk, which made me confident to ride farther with my friends.

Sugestão: Make a clear, direct statement and support it with specific reasons and an example. Fix grammar (use plural 'bikes', correct connectors, complete sentences) and use linking words like “because”, “for example” or “so” to make the idea coherent. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and for exercise. For example, children often learn to ride on quiet streets, and teenagers use bikes to go to school or meet friends, so bicycles are a common part of daily life.

× Yes I had a bike when I was a child. That bike gifted to me my younger older brother to me on my 4th birthday that's I ride every day.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. That bike was gifted to me by my younger brother on my fourth birthday, and I rode it every day.

Errors: missing auxiliary 'was' for passive voice and wrong word order ('gifted to me my younger older brother to me') — this is passive voice and preposition errors; inconsistent tense and wrong verb form 'that's I ride' should be past tense. Suggestion: Use the past passive construction 'was gifted to me by [agent]'; use correct agent preposition 'by'; use consistent past tense 'rode' for habitual past action. Also add commas for clarity.

× Yes, bike is very important in my country because as a child we are a road ride with playing and when we are.

✓ Yes, bikes are very important in my country because as children we ride on the road while playing.

Errors: noun number and article—'bike is' should be plural 'bikes are' to match general statement (singular/plural and subject-verb agreement); 'as a child' should be plural 'as children' to match 'we'; 'are a road ride with playing' is ungrammatical — wrong verb forms and prepositions. Suggestion: Use plural for general facts, change to 'we ride on the road while playing' for correct verb and preposition usage.

× More than 10 year then we going to.

✓ When we were more than ten years old, we would go out to ride.

Errors: incomplete sentence with missing verb and wrong tense; 'More than 10 year' needs plural 'years' and a subordinating clause; 'we going to' lacks auxiliary. Suggestion: Make a full clause with time expression 'When we were more than ten years old' and use past habitual 'we would go out to ride' or 'we went out to ride' depending on intended meaning.