Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và cấu trúc: giảm từ thừa (ví dụ “Uh”), sửa ngữ pháp (thời động từ), và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn với một câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp; (2) dùng thì phù hợp (past simple) khi kể chuyện; (3) tránh mâu thuẫn như “after that I can do it after a few years later” — nên dùng “after a few tries” hoặc “a few days/weeks”. Thêm liên từ đơn giản (for example, but, however) để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: Yes. My dad bought me a small bike when I was about five. I couldn't ride it at first because I struggled to keep my balance, but after a few practice sessions I learned how to ride it on my own.

Sugestão: Cải thiện rõ ràng và vốn từ: làm câu mạch lạc hơn bằng việc dùng cấu trúc so sánh và lý do cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (ví dụ “it is quite affordable” → “they are affordable”; “much more many others vehicles” → “many more other vehicles” hoặc “many other types of vehicles”). Thêm ví dụ hoặc thống kê ngắn để cụ thể hóa ý. Giữ độ dài tối đa 4–5 câu.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe bikes are still common because they are relatively cheap and convenient for short trips. However, in recent years fewer people choose bikes since more families own cars and motorcycles, making cycling less common in urban areas.

× I tried a few times and found it difficult to keep my balance, but after that I can do it after a few years later.

✓ I tried a few times and found it difficult to keep my balance, but after a few years I could do it.

The sentence mixes past and present/modal forms incorrectly. The action of being able to ride refers to a past time ('after a few years'), so use the past form 'could' rather than present 'can'. Also 'after that' and 'after a few years later' are redundant; keep only 'after a few years'. Suggestion: keep verb tense consistent when describing past events and avoid redundant time expressions.

× Bikes are quite popular in my country because it is quite affordable so everyone can buy it.

✓ Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are quite affordable, so everyone can buy them.

The pronoun and verb must agree with the plural subject 'Bikes'. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Also match 'them' as the object pronoun rather than 'it'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number with their antecedents.

× But nowadays I feel like people use less bikes because they are much more many others vehicles.

✓ But nowadays I feel like people use bikes less because there are many more other vehicles.

The phrase 'less bikes' is incorrect; with countable nouns use 'fewer' or restructure to 'use bikes less'. 'Much more many others vehicles' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'many more other vehicles' and include 'there are' to introduce existence. Suggestion: with countable nouns use 'fewer' or rephrase, and use 'there are' with 'many more other vehicles'.