Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have a back when I was 12.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, most most of people in China have their own bike to get outside.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答需注意时态和发音错误,并且要更完整自然。可以用一到两句直接回答,再加一两句补充细节,例如谁给你的、你用它做什么。避免拼写与发音错误(bike 而不是 back),过去时应使用 had。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was 12. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I used it to ride to school and around the neighborhood every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答需更准确流畅并避免重复。注意语法(most of the people 或 most people)和用词(use bikes to get around rather than 'get outside')。可提供一两句具体例子或原因来支持观点,例如城市通勤、共享单车的普及。
Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China. Many people use bicycles or shared bikes for short commutes, especially in cities, because they are cheap and convenient.
× Yes, I have a back when I was 12.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 12.
原句使用現在時態的動詞 have(我有)與表示過去時間狀語 when I was 12(當我12歲時)不一致,應使用過去式 had。此外原句單詞 back 為拼寫錯誤,正確應為 bike(自行車)。建議:看到明確的過去時間詞(如 when I was... / last year / in 2000 等),動詞需使用過去時;注意單詞拼寫。
× Yes, most most of people in China have their own bike to get outside.
✓ Yes, most people in China have their own bikes to go out.
原句有重複詞 most most,屬於書寫錯誤;另外短語 most of people 應為 most people(在不加限定詞時);bike 在泛指多數人各自擁有時應用複數 bikes。短語 to get outside 不夠地道,常用 go out 表達外出。建議:刪除重複詞,使用 most people,名詞根據語境選擇單複數,常用固定搭配 go out 表達“外出”。