Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., use past tense consistently, correct word order). Also fix unclear phrase "we've lost bikes"—explain if you mean you rode together or lost them.

Exemplo: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child; my father bought matching bikes for my sister and me. Usually, we rode to the park on weekends, and I remember practicing until I could ride without help. As a result, I became confident cycling around the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Structure your answer with a clear opinion, one or two specific reasons, and a brief example. Reduce filler words (uh, um) and avoid repeating the same phrase. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "bike-sharing program" instead of "rent that from the government").

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Taiwan because they are convenient and affordable. For example, the government-run bike-sharing program provides bikes at many stations across cities, so people often use them for short trips to work or school. Consequently, you can often see many cyclists on city streets.

× Uh, yes, I had a bike when I was a child and my father bought that for my, for me and my sister.

✓ Uh, yes, I had a bike when I was a child and my father bought it for my sister and me.

The sentence uses past tense correctly but has a pronoun/object order and pronoun choice issue. 'That' is less natural for a specific object previously mentioned; 'it' is preferred. The normal order is 'my sister and me' when used as objects. Also remove the stutter 'for my, for me'. Suggestion: use 'it' and place 'my sister and me' as the object.

× And when we were really young, really, really young age, we usually went to the park and we've lost bikes and.

✓ And when we were really, really young, we usually went to the park and we lost our bikes.

The phrase 'really, really young age' is ungrammatical; 'really, really young' or 'at a very young age' is correct. 'We've lost bikes and' is an incomplete clause and mixes present perfect with past habitual context. Use simple past 'we lost' and add possessive 'our' for clarity. Avoid trailing conjunction 'and' without completing the clause.

× Uh, yes. Uh, in my opinion, uh, bikes are really popular in my country because people usually, uh, get the transportation by bikes because it's really convenient and you can see every bikes around in Taiwan and we can rent that from the government for free.

✓ Uh, yes. In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because people usually use bikes for transportation since they are convenient, and you can see bikes everywhere in Taiwan; we can rent them from the government for free.

Multiple issues: 'get the transportation by bikes' is ungrammatical — use 'use bikes for transportation.' 'It's really convenient' refers to plural 'bikes', so change to 'they are convenient.' 'every bikes around' uses incorrect quantifier and plural form; correct is 'bikes everywhere.' 'that' referring to bikes should be plural 'them.' Also choose consistent present simple for general facts. Suggestions: use 'use bikes for transportation', 'they are convenient', 'bikes everywhere', and 'rent them'.

× So, uh, people usually use that to get.

✓ So, people usually use them to get around.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses 'that' (singular demonstrative) to refer to bikes (plural). 'To get' is a verb without an object; the idiomatic phrase is 'get around' meaning travel locally. Use plural demonstrative 'them' and complete the phrasal verb 'get around'.