Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unintelligible and does not respond to the examiner's question. For Part 1 you should give a direct, simple answer (yes/no) followed by 1–2 brief supporting details. Keep sentences clear and relevant, use present/past forms correctly, and limit to up to five sentences. For example, begin with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then add who used it, how often, or why.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about seven, and I rode it almost every day after school. It helped me get around the neighborhood and I learned to balance on it quickly.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has grammar, fluency and vocabulary issues and filler words. To improve: (1) Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question. (2) Use correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “people here use cars” not “using”). (3) Use linking words to connect points (e.g., “however,” “for example”). (4) Provide one specific example or brief comparison. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or public transport because they are faster and more convenient. However, younger people often ride bikes for leisure or exercise, for example, on weekends at city parks.

× Have you changed or Rosen and Demophon Ratuslam.

✓ No, I didn't. My name is Rosen Demophon Ratuslam.

The original sentence is incoherent and lacks a clear verb structure for answering the examiner's past question. It also mixes present perfect form 'Have you changed' with unrelated names. Use a full declarative sentence with correct past-tense negation (didn't) to answer 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' if the student means they did not. If the student intended to give their name, provide a clear introduction sentence. Suggestion: decide the intended meaning and use a simple past negative ('No, I didn't have one') or a clear present simple introduction ('My name is Rosen Demophon Ratuslam').

× Actually, I think no, it's not popular.

✓ Actually, I think no, they are not popular.

The subject is 'bikes' (plural), so the pronoun and verb must agree in number. The original uses 'it's' (singular). Use 'they are' for plural subjects. Also 'I think no' is informal; 'I don't think they are popular' is more natural. Suggestion: say 'I don't think bikes are popular' or 'I think they are not popular.'

× A lot of people here in my country using cars or public transportation.

✓ A lot of people here in my country use cars or public transportation.

The original lacks the auxiliary verb for the present continuous and instead needs simple present 'use' to describe habitual action. 'Using' as a present participle requires an auxiliary (are using) or should be replaced by the base verb for habits. Suggestion: use simple present for routines: 'people use.'

× I think, uh, young people are mostly used, uh, bikes and uh, not for uh, going anywhere.

✓ I think young people mostly use bikes, and not for going anywhere.

'Are mostly used bikes' incorrectly uses passive or a misplaced 'used.' Young people are the users, so active voice 'use' (base form) is required. Also subject-verb agreement: 'young people use' (plural). Remove filler 'uh' and fix word order. Suggestion: use active voice and simple present for habitual actions: 'young people mostly use bikes.'

× They are just to use it for fun.

✓ They just use them for fun.

Pronoun reference and structure are incorrect. 'They are just to use it' mixes passive/infinitive structures and uses singular 'it' for plural 'bikes.' Use active voice with correct plural pronoun 'them' and simple present 'use' to express purpose. Suggestion: 'They just use them for fun' or 'Bikes are mainly used for fun.'