Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Correct grammar (use simple past) and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Be concise (max 5 sentences). For example, say you didn’t own a bike but shared one, describe who you rode with and a brief memory or reason why you enjoyed it. Pay attention to verb forms (did not have, rode) and reduce hesitations/repetitions.

Exemplo: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, but I often used my cousin’s bicycle. We rode it around our neighborhood after school, and I remember enjoying the freedom of cycling with my friends because it felt adventurous and fun.

Sugestão: Be precise and avoid absolute claims. Begin with a direct answer, then give specific supporting details and use linking words (for example, because, for instance, or such as). Use correct collocations (ride a bike, commute to work) and vary vocabulary (common, widely used).

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many people ride motorbikes or bicycles to commute to work or to run errands, especially in crowded cities where traffic and parking are problems.

× No, I did not had any bike when I was child.

✓ No, I did not have any bike when I was a child.

Use 'did not' with the base form of the verb (have). 'Had' is past tense and should not follow 'did'. Also include the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: Use 'did not have' for negation in simple past and add 'a' before 'child'.

× Rather I had bicycle with which I would would would like dried with my friends and my cousins.

✓ Rather, I had a bicycle that I used to ride with my friends and cousins.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'bicycle' and awkward relative clause. Repetition 'would would would like dried' is incorrect. Use 'used to ride' to express habitual past actions. 'With my friends and cousins' is more natural than 'my friends and my cousins'. Suggestion: Use 'a bicycle' and 'used to ride' for habits in the past.

× I enjoyed a lot doing that activity in my childhood.

✓ I enjoyed that activity a lot in my childhood.

Word order is awkward. Place 'a lot' after the verb or at the end of the clause. Also 'in my childhood' is acceptable but 'during my childhood' is slightly more natural. Suggestion: 'I enjoyed that activity a lot during my childhood.'

× Yes, I think that bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are very popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It correctly uses present simple to state a general fact.

× Each and every person travels on bike.

✓ Everyone travels by bike.

Use 'everyone' or 'every person' and the preposition 'by' with modes of transport. 'On bike' is incorrect; 'by bike' is the standard expression. Suggestion: Use 'Everyone travels by bike' or 'Most people travel by bike.'

× It may be going out for their work or to drive till the their office.

✓ They may be going out for work or traveling to their office.

The clause is awkward and has tense/structure issues. 'It may be' is unnatural here; use 'They may be' or 'This may be' depending on meaning. 'For their work' can be shortened to 'for work'. 'To drive till the their office' is incorrect: 'to travel to their office' or 'to go to their office' is correct, and remove duplicate 'the'. Suggestion: 'They may be going out for work or traveling to their office.'