Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and articles, and avoid unfinished clauses. For example, say you didn’t have a bike as a young child, mention when you got one and who bought it, and give one brief detail about the bike’s condition or cost.

Exemplo: I didn’t have a bike when I was very young. However, when I started class six my father bought me a second-hand bicycle that cost about 2,000 taka, and it was slightly worn but still worked well.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: give a direct opinion, then support it with two clear reasons using linking words (e.g., because, therefore). Use correct vocabulary (flat terrain, convenient, affordable) and avoid unclear words. Be specific about who uses bikes and in what situations.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because the terrain is generally flat and cycling is cheap. As a result, many students and workers use bicycles and motorbikes for short trips and commuting, especially in towns where traffic is light.

× When I was child I didn't have bike but whenever I get admitted to class 6 my father bought a second hand bike which cost nearly 2000 taka but it.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike, but when I was admitted to class 6 my father bought a second-hand bike which cost nearly 2000 taka.

Errors: missing articles and incorrect tense/structure. Use 'a child' and 'a bike' because singular countable nouns require an article (Grammar Problem Type ID 1 and 22). 'Whenever I get admitted' is wrong for a past event; use past simple 'when I was admitted' to match the surrounding past-tense narrative (Grammar Problem Type ID 6/5). 'Second-hand' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Remove the extraneous 'but it.' Suggestion: add appropriate articles before singular countable nouns and keep consistent past tense for events that happened in the past.

× In my country the lanteria is flat and terrain also and people here use bikes and motorbikes because this is very cheap and handy instrument for outing.

✓ In my country the land is flat and the terrain is gentle, and people here use bicycles and motorbikes because they are very cheap and convenient for going out.

Errors: word choice and article use. 'Lanteria' appears to be a wrong word; likely 'land' or 'land area'. Add 'the' before 'land' and 'terrain' when referring to a specific feature (Grammar Problem Type ID 17). Use 'is' for both nouns to form parallel clauses (present simple is acceptable for general statements). 'People here use bikes and motorbikes' is fine, but 'this is very cheap and handy instrument' has pronoun/number and word choice issues: use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'bikes and motorbikes' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12) and replace 'handy instrument for outing' with 'convenient for going out' for natural English (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Suggestion: choose correct nouns, use articles consistently, ensure pronouns agree in number, and prefer natural collocations like 'convenient' and 'going out'.