Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a concise topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid hesitations and incorrect words (e.g. 'bag'/'back' should be 'bike'), and keep to 2–4 well connected sentences. Add one specific reason with a brief example and use linking words (e.g. 'because', 'so', 'however'). Also watch grammar (past tenses and verb forms) and reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'you know'.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was afraid of falling, so my parents preferred I didn't learn to ride. For example, once I fell while running and that made me reluctant to try cycling. As a result, I never took cycling lessons.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary: begin with a clear statement, then give specific reasons and one short example. Correct word choice matters ('country' not repeated, 'citizens' plural agreement, 'bike' not 'bag', 'work' not 'web'). Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' and avoid filler phrases. Keep it within 3–4 coherent sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are still popular in China because many people find them affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, students and office workers often cycle to school or work to avoid traffic and save money. Therefore, cycling remains a common commuting choice in many cities.

× I always think riding a bag can be extremely dangerous.

✓ I always thought riding a bike could be extremely dangerous.

The context is past time (childhood), so the verb should be in the past tense: 'always thought' rather than 'always think'. Also 'bag' is likely a mistaken word for 'bike'; use 'bike'. Use 'could' to match past modal possibility.

× So at a very young age I started to be reluctant to, uh, you know, to learn how to ride back, even though my father was, you know, bumbling about why I didn't, uh, take some related courses to do it.

✓ So at a very young age I became reluctant to, you know, learn how to ride a bike, even though my father was complaining about why I didn't take any related courses.

Use 'became reluctant' (common collocation) rather than 'started to be reluctant'. Remove the extra 'to' before 'learn'. 'Ride back' is incorrect; use 'ride a bike'. 'Bumbling about' is incorrect in this sense; 'complaining about' fits. Use 'take any related courses' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, in China, you know, China is the biggest middle income country, so not every citizens in this country can afford to buy a private vehicle.

✓ Yes, in China, you know, China is the largest middle-income country, so not every citizen in this country can afford to buy a private vehicle.

'Citizens' should be singular after 'every': use 'every citizen'. 'Biggest' in this context is better as 'largest' and 'middle income' should be hyphenated as 'middle-income' when used as an adjective.

× You know, so most of the people will still uh, choose to commute to their web places or schools by riding a bag, which can be more cost effective.

✓ You know, so most people still choose to commute to their workplaces or schools by riding a bike, which can be more cost-effective.

'Most of the people' is wordy; use 'most people'. 'Will still choose' is awkward for general statements—use 'still choose'. 'Web places' is incorrect; 'workplaces' is correct. Replace 'bag' with 'bike'. Hyphenate 'cost-effective' when used as an adjective.