Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence in the past tense, correct grammar, keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences), and add one or two specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrases. For example, correct verb forms (rode, was), plural/singular agreement, and clearer vocabulary (memories → memory, ride → rode).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school almost every day, and it was one of my happiest memories. For example, my friend and I would race along the river path and often stop to buy snacks on the way, which made the journey fun and memorable.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and examples. Use correct vocabulary (popular, choose, commute), grammatical structures (present simple for general facts), and linking words (because, for example, so). Avoid unclear phrases and unrelated fragments. Keep to 2–3 sentences max.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances. For example, students ride to school and workers cycle to nearby offices to avoid traffic. In some regions, bike-sharing schemes also help people travel between towns easily.

× Definitely, I usually ride my bike to go to school and this is an amazing memories for me because I can buy back with my friend, go to school together and we'll see many and funny stories on the way.

✓ Definitely, I usually rode my bike to go to school and those were amazing memories for me because I could ride back with my friend, go to school together and we saw many funny things on the way.

Sentence mixes present simple with past context. The question asks about when the student was a child, so past tense should be used (past tense issue). Use plural/singular correctly: 'memories' with 'were' and 'those' instead of 'this' (demonstrative agreement). 'Can buy back' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'ride back'. 'We'll see' is future/modal mix; change to past 'we saw'. Also remove redundant 'and' and correct 'many and funny stories' to 'many funny things' for natural phrasing. Suggestions: keep verbs in past (rode, were, could, rode, saw) and ensure demonstratives match count (those memories).

× Definitely, whether you are a student or worker, many people were chosen bye bye as they're in running way especially they like running from one city to another city that is the bring achievement for.

✓ Definitely, whether you are a student or a worker, many people choose bikes because they are convenient for commuting; especially, they like traveling from one city to another, which they consider an achievement.

Multiple pronoun and word-choice errors. 'Worker' needs an article 'a worker' (article/pronoun context) and 'many people were chosen bye bye' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended 'many people choose bikes'. 'They're in running way' is incorrect pronoun and phrase; replace with 'they are convenient for commuting'. 'They like running from one city to another city' should be 'they like traveling from one city to another'. 'That is the bring achievement for' is ungrammatical; correct to 'which they consider an achievement'. Suggestions: use correct pronouns and relative clauses ('which' to refer to the action), maintain present simple for general facts (choose, are, like).