Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct verb tenses; start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "went out" twice) and incorrect forms ("I use it a lot when I went"). Also add a final short comment or feeling. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes — I had my own bike and learned to ride it in kindergarten. I practiced almost every day, and I often used it to visit friends or explore nearby places. Riding that bike felt very freeing and became my favourite way to get around.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar and give clearer, more specific reasons and examples. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then support it with 1–2 reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid errors like "bike is" (use "bikes are") and repetition. Mention specific evidence such as statistics, infrastructure, or daily observations to strengthen your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Japan because many people use them for short trips and towns have extensive bike parking. For example, I often see children commuting to school and adults cycling to shops, and there are many local bike shops and parking areas.

× I would practice riding almost every day and I use it a lot when I went out, went out with my friend, or traveled to different places nearby.

✓ I would practice riding almost every day and I used it a lot when I went out with my friends or traveled to different places nearby.

Mixing past and present tense in the same context causes inconsistency. The sentence begins with 'I would' and refers to past habitual actions, so verbs should be in the past tense: change 'use' to 'used' and 'friend' to plural 'friends' to match 'went out with my friends'. Also remove the repeated phrase 'went out' for conciseness. Suggestion: keep all verbs describing past habits in past tense.

× Riding that bike felt very freeing and it became my main.

✓ Riding that bike felt very freeing and it became my main mode of transport.

The phrase 'my main' is incomplete and leaves out the noun being described. This is a sentence structure/ellipsis error. Specify the noun 'mode of transport' (or 'means of transport') to complete the idea. Suggestion: always include the noun after determiners like 'my main' to make the sentence complete.

× Yes, I feel like bike is the main way of traveling for almost every people in Japan because I often see the bike shops in my town and I I always watch children or adult use.

✓ Yes, I feel like bikes are the main way of traveling for many people in Japan because I often see bike shops in my town and I always watch children and adults use them.

Multiple errors: 'bike' needs plural 'bikes' to refer generally (article error and singular/plural), 'are' should be used with plural subject (subject-verb agreement), 'almost every people' is incorrect; use 'many people' or 'almost everyone', and 'the bike shops' can be 'bike shops'. Also 'I I' is a typo and 'children or adult use' lacks object and parallelism; change to 'children and adults use them' to supply the object pronoun and correct coordination. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements about a population, ensure verb agrees, and keep parallel structure when listing groups.