Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì động từ, sở hữu, động từ nguyên mẫu), phát âm một số từ và cấu trúc câu cho tự nhiên hơn; rút gọn và sắp xếp câu để không lặp ý và không quá dài (tối đa 3–4 câu). Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai tặng, bao nhiêu tuổi, tần suất luyện tập, kết quả). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản như “and”, “so”, “by” để nối ý, và kiểm tra các từ sai chính tả như “practice”→“practised/practiced”, “write”→“ride”.

Exemplo: Yes. My parents bought me a bike for my seventh birthday, and I practised riding it almost every afternoon with my friends. I learned quickly, so by the end of the summer I could ride confidently around the neighbourhood.

Sugestão: Cần cải thiện tính chính xác ngữ pháp, từ vựng phù hợp và mạch lạc: dùng danh từ đúng (citizens), động từ đúng (like bikes), rút ngắn câu tránh tiếng đệm (“umm”) và đưa ra lý do cụ thể, có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Hãy nêu một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 lý do cụ thể với từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: health, environment, convenience) và kết luận ngắn. Tránh dùng cụm mơ hồ như “so and so on”.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and good for physical health. They are also environmentally friendly, so more people choose cycling instead of driving.

× My parents gave me a bike on my 7th birthday and I practice riding it's almost every afternoon with my friends.

✓ My parents gave me a bike on my 7th birthday and I practiced riding it almost every afternoon with my friends.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The action of practicing riding refers to the same time period as receiving the bike (past), so 'practice' should be the past tense 'practiced'. Also 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is' which is incorrect; the object pronoun 'it' is needed. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (use past for past events) and use correct pronoun forms.

× I learned quickly and by the end of the summer I could write confidently around the neighborhood with my.

✓ I learned quickly and by the end of the summer I could ride confidently around the neighborhood by myself.

The original sentence has a missing object after 'with my' and uses 'write' instead of 'ride' (likely a typographical error). Also 'with my' is incomplete. The corrected sentence uses 'ride' (appropriate verb) and 'by myself' to indicate independence. Suggestion: check for typos and ensure each preposition has a complete complement.

× Yes of course umm citizen in my country always like by in the every afternoon because it have them improve the cervical health and mental health so and so on.

✓ Yes, of course, citizens in my country always like to ride bikes in the afternoon because they help improve physical health and mental health, among other benefits.

Multiple errors: 'citizen' should be plural 'citizens' to match 'always', so singular/plural issue. 'like by in the every afternoon' contains several problems: correct phrase is 'like to ride bikes in the afternoon'. 'It have them' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'them' and wrong verb form 'have' — use 'they help' (subject-verb agreement and pronoun choice). 'cervical health' is incorrect in context; likely 'physical health'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to people in general, choose appropriate verbs and pronouns, and use accurate vocabulary.