Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy, coherence and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses (use past tense), use articles and plural forms correctly, and avoid filler words (uh). Mention a short specific anecdote (when/how old, who helped) to make the answer more natural and engaging. Keep to under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it because it made me feel free and happy, but at first I was very scared because I kept falling over. Eventually my father helped me practice for a few afternoons, and after that I could ride confidently on my own.

Sugestão: Make your answer direct and specific. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes or No) and give 1–2 concrete reasons using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Use correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms, and replace vague phrases with specifics (e.g., "many people use bikes for commuting or exercise"). Avoid repetition and fillers. If possible, give a short example or statistic to support your claim.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for commuting and exercise because cycling is an affordable and healthy option, so you can see lots of cyclists in parks and on bike lanes, especially at weekends.

× Yes, when I work twice I really like ride bicycle, it's make me happy when I try by myself and uh, but the first time I really scared because I fall down every time I try.

✓ Yes. When I was about two, I really liked riding a bicycle; it made me happy when I tried by myself, but the first time I was really scared because I fell down every time I tried.

Multiple errors: incorrect tense and age expression ('work twice' should be 'was about two' — original likely intended age), past tense required for a past event (use 'was', 'liked', 'made', 'tried', 'was', 'fell'), incorrect verb forms and verb+ing ('ride' should be 'riding'), subject-verb agreement and auxiliary omissions ('it's make' → 'it made'), and run-on sentence/punctuation. Suggestion: state past events with past simple consistently, use gerund after 'like' when referring to activities (liked riding), and separate clauses with punctuation or conjunctions to improve clarity.

× Yes, honestly, I would say because uh, nowadays in my country, uh, people have uh, really live a healthy life and everyone have a buy in uh, my countries.

✓ Yes. Honestly, I would say that nowadays in my country people live a healthier life and everyone can buy a bicycle.

Errors: unnecessary filler words removed for clarity. Use of verb 'have live' is incorrect — choose one verb; present simple 'people live' is appropriate for general statements (Grammar Problem Type 6). 'Healthier' is comparative (improvement) rather than 'healthy life'. Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone have' should be 'everyone can' or 'everyone has' depending on meaning (use 'can buy' to express ability). 'My countries' incorrect; singular 'my country' or omit possessive. Also corrected noun choice 'buy a bicycle' instead of vague 'a buy'. Suggestion: use present simple for general truths, ensure subject-verb agreement with singular indefinite pronouns (everyone + singular verb), and choose correct noun phrases and prepositions.