Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, use a clear topic sentence, and add one brief supporting detail with a linking word. Correct minor grammar (use past simple consistently) and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I was afraid to ride it after an accident with my sister, so I rarely used it.

Sugestão: Start with a clear direct answer, use linking words for reasons, correct grammar (plural/singular, word order), and avoid double negatives. Give one specific example or location to support your point.

Exemplo: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country because heavy traffic makes riding dangerous. However, they are more common in seaside towns where there is less traffic and wider promenades.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child but I was scared to ride it because I had an accident with my sister so it was not that useful.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I was afraid to ride it because I had an accident with my sister, so it was not very useful.

The main tense use is correct (past). Change 'scared' to 'afraid' for natural collocation when describing feelings. Add commas to separate clauses for clarity. Replace 'that useful' with 'very useful' for more natural English. Suggestion: Use commas before coordinating conjunctions joining independent clauses and choose more natural adjectives (afraid rather than scared in this context).

× No, it's not that popular because in my country there is lots of traffic and it's dangerous to use bikes in the roads, so people do not prefer using bikes.

✓ No, they are not that popular because in my country there is a lot of traffic and it's dangerous to use bikes on the roads, so people do not prefer using them.

Subject refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use plural verb 'are' not 'is'. 'There is lots of traffic' should be 'there is a lot of traffic' (uncountable noun 'traffic' uses 'a lot of'). Use preposition 'on the roads' not 'in the roads'. Replace repeated 'bikes' with pronoun 'them' for cohesion. Suggestion: Match verb number with the plural subject, use correct quantifier for uncountable nouns, and use correct prepositions for locations ('on the road/roads').

× Maybe it's they can use it on more seaside, seaside parts of my country, but I don't think they don't use it that much.

✓ Maybe they can use them more in coastal parts of my country, but I don't think people use them that much.

Original sentence has confused structure and double negation ('I don't think they don't use'). 'It's they can use it' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'they can use them more in coastal parts'. Use 'coastal' rather than repeated 'seaside'. Ensure pronoun agreement: 'them' for plural 'bikes'. Remove double negative to express intended meaning. Suggestion: Simplify sentence structure: state the idea clearly with subject + modal + verb, avoid double negatives, and use consistent pronouns for plural nouns.