Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions and fix tense/agreement errors. Use one or two specific supporting details and a linking word. For example, say you wanted a bike and explain briefly why you didn’t have one (family decision, personality, or circumstances). Aim for 2–3 sentences and correct past tense.

Exemplo: I didn’t have a bicycle when I was a child, although I would have liked one. My family decided not to buy one because I preferred staying at home on weekends, so they thought it wasn’t necessary.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Correctly describe how shared bikes work and explain why they increase popularity (convenience, affordability, environment). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because of bike-sharing schemes. These shared bikes are parked around the city and can be unlocked with a QR code, making cycling a cheap and convenient option for short trips.

× No I don't really have a bike for myself when I was a child because but I would like but I would love to have one but since I'm the kind of lazy person who didn't really go out even during the weekend so my family didn't bought me one.

✓ No, I didn't really have a bike when I was a child because I would have liked to have one, but since I'm the kind of lazy person who didn't really go out even on weekends, my family didn't buy me one.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Use past tense consistently for past situations: 'didn't really have' (correct), 'would have liked' (conditional form referring to past desire), and 'didn't buy' (past simple, not 'didn't bought'). Also simplify redundant conjunctions and use 'on weekends' rather than 'during the weekend' for habitual weekend reference. Suggestions: keep tense consistent, avoid using 'do/did' with past participle; use base verb after 'didn't'.

× Although I quite enjoy riding a bike.

✓ Although I quite enjoyed riding a bike.

Context is past (childhood), so the verb should be in past tense: 'enjoyed' instead of 'enjoy'. Use past to match surrounding sentences. If speaking about a general present habit, keep present, but here it refers to childhood.

× Uh, yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because especially, uh, there is the term called shared bike in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially because of the concept of shared bikes.

The original is wordy and has awkward structure ('there is the term called'). Rewrite for clarity: place 'especially' near the clause it modifies and use 'concept of shared bikes' or 'shared bikes' rather than 'the term called'. Remove fillers for fluency.

× It's which like there are a type of bikes which are on the street and people just can't ride on them by just getting a QR code without buying them.

✓ They are a type of bike found on the street that people can use by scanning a QR code without buying them.

Awkward and incorrect phrasing: 'It's which like' is ungrammatical. Use a clear subject 'They' referring to shared bikes, 'a type of bike' (singular) or 'a type of bikes' is incorrect — use 'a type of bike' or 'bikes'. Use relative clause 'that people can use by scanning a QR code' and avoid double 'just'. Ensure modal and infinitive forms are correct ('can use' not 'can't ride on them by just getting').