Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with tense and article use; start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add 2–3 concise supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and minor grammar errors (e.g., “I had a bike,” “when I was a child,” “it was black”). Use specific details (age, how often, memorable moment) to enrich the answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me for my tenth birthday, and I rode it to school and to my tuition classes almost every day. It was a small black bicycle with a bell, and I remember feeling proud because it was my first-ever major gift.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer topic sentence and organize supporting reasons with linking words. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., “bicycles help people stay physically fit,” “pollution is increasing, so many people choose bicycles”). Add a statistic or comparison if possible and avoid filler words like “uh.” Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Firstly, they help people stay physically fit, and secondly, they are an eco-friendly alternative as air pollution is worsening. As a result, many commuters, especially students and short-distance workers, prefer cycling to save money and reduce their environmental impact.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child). The student used present tense 'have' but should use past tense 'had' to match the time reference. Use past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past. Suggestion: Pay attention to time expressions (when I was a child) and change verbs to past tense accordingly.

× When I was child, my father gifted me that bike on my birthday and I used to go to my school and my tuition classes with that bike.

✓ When I was a child, my father gifted me that bike for my birthday, and I used to go to school and to my tuition classes on it.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'child' and awkward prepositions. 'on my birthday' is acceptable but 'for my birthday' is more natural. 'go to my school' should be 'go to school'; 'with that bike' is better as 'on it' or 'by bike.' Suggestions: include articles where needed, use natural collocations (go to school), and keep parallel structure with conjunctions.

× It is black in color and I really like that bike because it was my very first birthday gift.

✓ It was black, and I really liked that bike because it was my very first birthday gift.

Tense inconsistency: earlier context is past, so 'is' and 'like' should be 'was' and 'liked'. 'Black in color' is wordy; use 'black'. Maintain consistent past tense. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same time frame and prefer concise adjective phrases.

× Yes, they are very popular in my country because uh, bike meet help to maintain uh a physical health of a person and nowadays pollution is increasing very much, so people try to use bike much in my country.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country because bikes help to maintain a person's physical health, and because pollution has been increasing a lot, people try to use bikes more in my country.

Several issues combined: singular/plural and tense. 'bike meet' is incorrect; likely 'bikes help'. Use plural 'bikes' to match 'they'. 'a physical health of a person' is incorrect; use 'a person's physical health' or 'physical health'. 'nowadays pollution is increasing very much' is awkward; 'pollution has been increasing a lot' is more natural. 'use bike much' should be 'use bikes more'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree, use correct noun phrases, and choose appropriate adverbial expressions for degree and frequency.