Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and coherent details. Use past simple for events and avoid long hesitations. Keep answers natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Add linking words (for example, "then", "after that", "so") and specific details (age, where you rode).

Exemplo: Yes. My mother bought me a bicycle for my tenth birthday, and it became an important part of my childhood. I practised riding it every day in the park near our house, and then my father helped me by running beside me until I found my balance. After a few days, I could ride confidently on my own and I felt very proud.

Sugestão: Make a clear comparison using correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Start with a direct opinion, then support it with reasons and examples. Use linking words ("however", "though", "for example") and avoid vague phrases. Be concise and specific about who uses bikes and where.

Exemplo: I don't think bicycles are as popular in my country as in places like China or the Netherlands. However, many children still ride bikes for fun and short trips, especially in residential areas and parks. For example, in my neighbourhood you can see groups of children cycling to school or to the playground every afternoon.

× When a world tried I my mom bought me a bike for my birthday and I think it is a part of my childhood.

✓ When I was young, my mom bought me a bike for my birthday and I think it is part of my childhood.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an impossible phrase 'When a world tried I'. This is a sentence structure error: the time clause should be 'When I was young' or 'When I was a child'. Also 'it is a part of my childhood' is acceptable but 'is part of my childhood' is more natural. Suggestion: place the time clause first, use correct subject 'I' and past tense 'was', and keep verbs in proper order.

× Yeah, I'm, I try to write it every day and suddenly one day when my dad was, umm, was practicing with me and he teach me to ride the bike and yeah, I can ride it.

✓ Yeah, I tried to ride it every day, and one day my dad was practicing with me and he taught me to ride the bike, and then I could ride it.

Multiple errors: 'I try to write it every day' is likely intended as 'I tried to ride it every day' (verb choice and tense). 'He teach me' is incorrect form; after a past context use past tense 'taught'. 'I can ride it' should be past ability 'I could ride it' to match the past narrative. This fits Verb + -ing form and past tense issues: use 'practicing' correctly for ongoing past action and use past simple for completed actions. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when describing a past event and use correct past participle/verb forms.

× Actually to compare with some country like China or Switzerland, uh, bikes and my country is not popular as, uh, some country, but yeah, there are a lot of children this with the same age like me, right by everyday.

✓ Compared with some countries like China or Switzerland, bikes in my country are not as popular, but there are many children of the same age as me who ride them every day.

The original has comparative structure errors and incorrect word choices: 'to compare with' should be 'Compared with'; 'some country' should be plural 'some countries'; subject-verb agreement 'bikes and my country is' is wrong — correct is 'bikes in my country are'. Use comparative phrase 'not as popular' and plural 'many children' instead of 'a lot of children this'. Also 'of the same age as me' is the correct comparative phrase and 'who ride them every day' clarifies the action. Suggestion: use correct comparative structures, plural nouns when referring to multiple countries or bikes, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× bikes and my country is not popular as, uh, some country

✓ bikes in my country are not as popular as in some countries

This fragment mixes nouns incorrectly and has a subject-verb agreement error: the subject is 'bikes' (plural) so the verb must be 'are', and the prepositional idea should be 'in my country' and 'as in some countries'. Suggestion: align subject and verb number and use proper comparative structure 'not as ... as'.

× there are a lot of children this with the same age like me, right by everyday.

✓ there are a lot of children of the same age as me who ride every day.

The original uses incorrect prepositions and word order: 'this with the same age' is ungrammatical. Correct is 'children of the same age as me'. 'Right by everyday' is unclear; likely 'who ride every day'. Suggestion: use 'of the same age as' to compare ages and 'every day' as two words meaning daily; place clauses so they clearly modify the noun.