Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: ข้อเสนอแนะ: ปรับไวยากรณ์และลำดับคำให้ถูกต้อง ใช้ประโยคเริ่มต้นที่ชัดเจนเพื่อตอบคำถาม แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดอย่างสั้นๆ ใช้คำเชื่อมเมื่อต้องเล่าเหตุการณ์ต่อเนื่อง และให้ข้อมูลเฉพาะเจาะจงมากขึ้น เช่น อายุตอนเริ่มขี่หรือสิ่งที่จำได้จากจักรยาน

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my mother bought for me when I was six. I practised riding it around our yard every weekend, and after a few days I was able to ride without help.

Sugestão: ข้อเสนอแนะ: ตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวข้อ และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อม (for example, because, however) เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผลและตัวอย่าง ให้รายละเอียดเฉพาะ เช่น สภาพถนน นโยบายหรือสถิติที่สังเกตเห็น

Exemplo: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my city. For example, there are few dedicated bike lanes and traffic can be dangerous, so most people prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel.

× Yes I have, I had a bike when I was a shy.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used 'have' incorrectly for a past possession question; the examiner asked about the past so 'did' or simple past is appropriate. Also 'shy' is a wrong word; context requires 'child'. Suggest using 'I did' to affirm and 'I had a bike when I was a child.' for clarity. Use simple past for past situations and choose the correct noun (child).

× My mom bought me a small tree view bike and I practice it riding it around the yard and little I learned to ride up to view bike.

✓ My mom bought me a small three-wheel bike and I practised riding it around the yard, and after a little time I learned to ride it well.

Multiple errors: 'tree view' is misspelling and wrong term; likely 'three-wheel' or 'tricycle.' 'Practice' should be past tense 'practised' to match past time. Redundant 'it' and awkward structure 'learned to ride up to view bike' should be 'after a little time I learned to ride it well.' Also add commas for clarity. Use past simple consistently for past actions, correct vocabulary, and arrange clauses logically.

× And not agree with that because in my country Thailand, they are not supporting people to use the kind of bicycle because there are no lane of bike in this city.

✓ I do not agree with that because in my country, Thailand, the government does not support people to use bicycles; there are no bike lanes in most cities.

The original sentence lacks subject and auxiliary for negation ('And not agree' is incomplete). Use 'I do not agree' and correct verb agreement 'does not support' if referring to government. 'the kind of bicycle' is vague; 'bicycles' suffices. 'no lane of bike' should be 'no bike lanes.' Also punctuation around 'Thailand' as apposition. Suggest using a clear subject, correct auxiliary verbs for negation, and standard collocations like 'bike lanes.'