Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (past tense), then add one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Correct tense and pronoun use, remove fragments, and explain reason or routine briefly.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandmother bought it for me, and I rode it almost every day to visit her and sometimes to cycle to school. Because the bike was sturdy and comfortable, I felt confident riding it around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Use correct noun forms (bike/bikes, motorbike/motorbikes) and avoid repetition. Give examples or comparisons to clarify how common bikes are and who uses them.

Exemplo: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel because they are faster and more convenient, but some people still use bikes for short trips or exercise in parks.

× Yes, of course I have a bike when I was trying on my.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time. Also 'trying on my' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'when I was a child' or 'when I was young'. Use clear past time phrase to match tense.

× Grandmother, she bought me because.

✓ My grandmother bought it for me.

The original uses a comma splice and an incomplete clause 'because' with no reason. Remove redundant pronoun 'she' after 'Grandmother' and complete the sentence. Use 'bought it for me' to indicate the object and beneficiary.

× Gerald and everyday I walk to school and my grandmother.

✓ Every day I walked to school with my grandmother.

This sentence is fragmented and confusing. 'Gerald' is likely a misheard word; assuming 'everyday' was intended, separate ideas and use past tense 'walked' to match earlier past context. Include preposition 'with' to show accompaniment.

× I think not very popular but somebody still use a motorbike not not motorbike user bike when they're want to go somewhere.

✓ I don't think they are very popular, but some people still use motorbikes or bicycles when they want to go somewhere.

Multiple problems: negative form 'I think not' is incorrect — use 'I don't think'. 'Not very popular' needs a subject 'they' (bikes). 'Somebody still use' requires plural agreement 'some people still use'. Remove duplicate 'not' and unclear phrase 'motorbike not not motorbike user bike' — clarify as 'motorbikes or bicycles'. Change 'they're want' to 'they want' (no contraction before base verb). Use present simple to state general facts.

× But actually people in my country only use some.

✓ But actually people in my country only use them occasionally.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'use some' which is incomplete. Provide an appropriate object 'them' (bikes/motorbikes) and an adverb 'occasionally' to convey limited use. Keep present simple for general statement.