Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (tense, articles, and word forms), simplify and make the answer natural and concise, and add one brief supporting detail with a linking phrase. For example, use past tense consistently, correct forms (e.g., "When I was a child"), and a clear reason ("my parents couldn't afford one"). Avoid unnecessary words like "able to drive" for a child — use a concise reason instead.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my parents couldn't afford one. However, I often borrowed my cousin's bike to ride around the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Use more natural phrases (e.g., "I think"), correct word order and articles, and avoid awkward expressions like "can be witnessed." Give one specific example or brief comparison to support your opinion, and link ideas with words such as "because," "for example," or "also."

Exemplo: I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use electric bikes to commute to work, which is cheaper than driving and helps avoid traffic.

× When I am child, I had no bike because I was not able to drive and my parents cannot affordable for purchasing a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had no bike because I was not able to ride and my parents could not afford to purchase a bike.

Errors: 'When I am child' uses wrong tense and missing article (should be past 'was' and include 'a'). 'was a child' matches past time reference. 'drive' is incorrect verb for bicycles; use 'ride'. 'cannot affordable for purchasing a bike' mixes modal and adjective incorrectly. Use past 'could not afford' + infinitive 'to purchase' or 'to buy'. Suggestions: use past tense consistently for past situations, include articles ('a child'), use correct verb for riding a bike, and use 'afford' with an object or infinitive ('could not afford to buy').

× I contemplate that bikes are more popular in my country because bikes are affordable and more comfortable and also a lot of variety in bikes can be witnessed in my country.

✓ I think that bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable, comfortable, and there is a wide variety of bikes available.

Errors: 'contemplate' is a formal verb meaning 'consider deeply' and is unnatural here; use 'think'. 'more popular' needs a comparison target; use 'very popular' or compare with something. Repetition of 'bikes' is awkward; use pronoun 'they'. 'more comfortable' without comparison is incorrect; remove 'more' or specify what they're more comfortable than. 'a lot of variety in bikes can be witnessed' is passive/unidiomatic; use 'there is a wide variety of bikes available'. Suggestions: choose natural verbs for opinion (think), avoid unnecessary comparatives, use pronouns to avoid repetition, and use idiomatic phrases like 'a wide variety available'.