Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more specific and expand with a brief supporting detail using one linking word. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a short example or reason. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six, and I practiced every day after school. Because of that practice, I became confident riding on busy streets and could ride long distances with my friends.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your view, then give one or two specific reasons or an example, using linking words (e.g., however, although, because). Avoid unclear phrases and grammar mistakes; be concise (2–4 sentences).

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country compared to places like Amsterdam. However, the government has started pilot schemes, such as car-free streets on weekends, so cycling is gradually becoming more common among young people.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I'm good at riding it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I was good at riding it.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses: 'I had' and 'I was good' should both be past to describe childhood. Use past tense 'was good' to maintain consistency. Suggestion: keep time frame consistent by using past tense for both clauses when referring to childhood.

× And for my opinion, I don't think so in my country as much as in Amsterdam, but I can see that my governments are trying to implement a free vehicles on Sunday and Saturday and they are trying.

✓ In my opinion, I don't think bikes are as popular in my country as they are in Amsterdam, but I can see that my government is trying to implement free vehicle days on Saturdays and Sundays.

Multiple issues addressed based on listed types: 'And for my opinion' is awkward; use 'In my opinion' (sentence structure). 'I don't think so in my country as much as in Amsterdam' has incorrect comparison structure and missing subject for comparison; corrected to 'bikes are as popular in my country as they are in Amsterdam' (comparison). 'my governments' is incorrect plurality; use singular 'my government' (incorrect use of pronouns/number - singular/plural). 'implement a free vehicles' mixes singular article with plural noun; correct to 'implement free vehicle days' (article/quantifier). 'on Sunday and Saturday' order and plurality corrected to 'on Saturdays and Sundays'. Verb agreement 'they are trying' redundant; changed to 'is trying' to agree with singular 'government' and remove repetition. Suggestions: use standard phrase 'In my opinion', keep consistent comparison structure 'as...as', ensure subject and verb agree in number, match articles with countable nouns, and use plural day forms when referring to recurring events.