Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently, avoid filler words (uh, um), and organize answer with a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 specific supporting details. Mention what the bike looked like, how you used it, and a brief feeling or result. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make it coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a small blue bicycle with training wheels. I rode it every day around my neighborhood, and because I practised a lot I became confident riding without help by the time I was eight.

Sugestão: Make statements more precise and use better vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear opinion, then give 2 specific reasons or examples. Replace vague words with precise nouns (people, bicycles, electric scooters). Reduce hesitations and use linking words (for example, nowadays, because, also).

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Bicycles are very common in my hometown because many people use them for short trips and exercise. Also, in recent years electric scooters have become popular, especially among teenagers, as they are convenient and cheap to rent.

× Actually, yes, I have, I have a pic when, uh, when I am child, uh, I have small build and rabbit and some ****** and uh, I was like like it's a pet very much because I spent my time with.

✓ Actually, yes, I have a picture from when I was a child. I had a small build, a rabbit and some other pets, and I liked the rabbit very much because I spent a lot of time with it.

ID:6: The student mixes present tense ('I have', 'I am child') with past context. When talking about childhood, use past tense ('was', 'had', 'spent'). Also corrected informal 'pic' to 'picture', added missing articles, clarified 'some ******' as 'some other pets', and replaced awkward phrasing 'I was like like it's a pet very much' with 'I liked the rabbit very much'. Suggestion: When describing past events, consistently use past tense verbs (was, had, spent) and include articles ('a', 'the') where needed; choose clear nouns instead of slang.

× Absolutely. I see a lot of person in my hometown, uh, they have Pikes and uh, nowadays they have, umm, something that, that skill scooters, the children's, uh, in my hometown had have a.

✓ Absolutely. I see a lot of people in my hometown; they have bikes, and nowadays they also have scooters for children.

ID:1: The student used singular 'person' instead of plural 'people', incorrect capitalisation 'Pikes' instead of 'bikes', and an unclear phrase 'skill scooters' and mangled ending. Correct plural nouns and choose the right vocabulary: 'people', 'bikes', 'scooters'. Also restructured the sentence for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural forms when referring to many individuals (people, bikes) and use simple clear phrases like 'scooters for children'.

× the children's, uh, in my hometown had have a.

✓ Children in my hometown have them now.

ID:5: The original fragment 'had have a' mixes past and present auxiliary verbs and is ungrammatical. If the intent is to say children now possess scooters, use present 'have'. If referring to past, use 'had'. Suggestion: Avoid combining auxiliaries; choose the correct tense and complete the sentence with a clear subject and verb.