Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify tense and structure, give a direct topic sentence and one specific detail. Use past tense for past events, and avoid extra words. For example, start with "Yes, I did" then add one brief detail such as who gave it or how you used it. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a red bike when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school every day.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "bike" as noun, "ride" as verb) and correct tense. Avoid hesitations and unfinished phrases. Example structure: state opinion, then use "because" to introduce reason, and add a short consequence or example.

Exemplo: I think bikes are less popular now than before, because more people use cars and public transport. For example, many parents worry that riding on busy roads is dangerous, so they prefer to drive their children instead.

× Yes, I have bought when I was child.

✓ Yes, I bought one when I was a child.

The original mixes present perfect ('have bought') with a specific past time ('when I was a child'), which is incorrect. Use the simple past 'bought' for actions completed at a definite time in the past. Also add the object 'one' and the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: use 'I bought one when I was a child.'

× When I was child, my uh, but is very popular, but when grow growing up now I think not many people, uh, like to bite because it's a bit dangerous.

✓ When I was a child, bikes were very popular, but as I grew up I think not many people like to ride them now because it's a bit dangerous.

This sentence has multiple structure and word-choice problems: missing articles ('a child'), incorrect noun/pronoun references ('my uh, but'), wrong verb forms ('grow growing up'), wrong verb choice ('bite' instead of 'bike/ride'), and tense inconsistency. Corrected version uses simple past 'were' for past state, past simple 'grew up' for the change, and present simple 'like' for current general truth. Use 'ride them' to refer to bikes.

× And now some parents uh.

✓ And now some parents do not allow their children to ride bikes.

This fragment lacks a verb and a complete idea (sentence without a verb / sentence structure error). To be meaningful, add a main verb and object. The suggested complete sentence uses present simple 'do not allow' to describe current parental behavior and specifies 'their children to ride bikes.'