Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct tense and article usage, and avoid redundancy. For example, say the bike’s color, the presence of training wheels, and how long you used it in two or three coherent sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was pink and had training wheels on both sides, so I felt safe while learning. I only used it for a short time because we moved houses and I lost interest.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then give specific reasons with linking words and avoid filler words. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., “less common” instead of “not that popular”) and provide one brief example or contrast to support your point.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are somewhat popular, but they are less common for daily travel. For example, most people prefer motorcycles and cars for commuting because they are faster and more convenient in city traffic.

× Yes, I had one when I was a child and I remember it was on a pink color and it has a training wheels on each side and I think I only used it for a while.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child and I remember it was pink and it had training wheels on each side and I think I only used it for a while.

Errors: 'on a pink color' is incorrect adjective usage and word order; say 'was pink'. 'it has a training wheels' mixes singular verb with plural noun and wrong tense. Use past tense 'had' to match 'I had' and plural 'training wheels' without 'a'. Suggestion: Use correct adjective form and consistent past tense: 'it was pink' and 'it had training wheels on each side.'

× Yes, I had one when I was a child and I remember it was on a pink color and it has a training wheels on each side and I think I only used it for a while.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child and I remember it was pink and it had training wheels on each side and I think I only used it for a while.

Error: Mixed tenses. The student begins in the past ('I had', 'I remember') but uses present tense 'it has'. Maintain past tense for past events: change 'has' to 'had'. This keeps tense consistency and clarity.

× Yes, I had one when I was a child and I remember it was on a pink color and it has a training wheels on each side and I think I only used it for a while.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child and I remember it was pink and it had training wheels on each side and I think I only used it for a while.

Error: 'a training wheels' is wrong because 'wheels' is plural and cannot take the singular article 'a'. Remove the article and use plural verb agreement: 'had training wheels.' Also correct 'on a pink color' to 'pink'.

× Yes, I had one when I was a child and I remember it was on a pink color and it has a training wheels on each side and I think I only used it for a while.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child and I remember it was pink and it had training wheels on each side and I think I only used it for a while.

Error: 'on a pink color' uses an incorrect preposition and noun phrase. Use adjective 'pink' directly with 'was' (it was pink) rather than 'on a pink color.' Also 'on each side' is fine, but ensure surrounding grammar is correct.

× I would say yes, but in certain circumstances it is really not that popular because umm, motorcycles and cars are usually used in public transport and bikes are not usually used.

✓ I would say yes, but in certain circumstances they are really not that popular because motorcycles and cars are usually used for public transport and bikes are not usually used.

Errors: Pronoun reference and preposition. 'it is really not that popular' should refer to 'bikes' plural: use 'they are'. Also use preposition 'for public transport' rather than 'in public transport' for natural English. Suggestion: Use correct plural pronoun agreement and appropriate preposition.

× I would say yes, but in certain circumstances it is really not that popular because umm, motorcycles and cars are usually used in public transport and bikes are not usually used.

✓ I would say yes, but in certain circumstances they are really not that popular because motorcycles and cars are usually used for public transport and bikes are not usually used.

Error: 'it' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural). Use 'they' to agree with plural noun. This ensures subject-pronoun agreement and clarity.