Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can make it more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid repeating obvious information and shorten long phrases (e.g., “did not” → “didn’t”).

Exemplo: No, I didn’t own a bike as a child. However, I often borrowed my cousin’s bike and practised in our courtyard every weekend until I felt confident riding on the road.

Sugestão: The main idea is clear but the answer has grammar errors, repetition, and unclear phrases. Give a concise topic sentence, then support it with one specific reason using a linking word. Correct grammar (plural forms, articles) and choose clearer vocabulary (e.g., “narrow streets” instead of “small looks and crooks”).

Exemplo: No, bicycles aren’t very popular in my country. Instead, most people prefer scooters and motorbikes because our cities have narrow streets and short distances, which make two-wheelers more convenient.

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country, instead scooters and two Wheelers are more popular in my country as my country has a very small areas and small looks and crooks where people can easily use their scooters and motorbikes.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country. Instead, scooters and two-wheelers are more popular because my country has very small areas and narrow lanes where people can easily use their scooters and motorbikes.

Errors: 'two Wheelers' should be 'two-wheelers' and plural/singular consistency needed; 'a very small areas' mixes singular article with plural noun. Reason: Use correct plural forms without wrong articles and use hyphenated compound noun 'two-wheelers'. Suggestion: Remove the article 'a' before plural 'areas' and use 'very small areas' or better 'small areas'; use 'narrow lanes' instead of 'small looks and crooks' which is incorrect vocabulary.

× ...my country has a very small areas and small looks and crooks where people can easily use their scooters and motorbikes.

✓ ...my country has very small areas and narrow lanes where people can easily use their scooters and motorbikes.

Errors: 'small looks and crooks' is incorrect word choice and 'small' repeated awkwardly. Reason: Use precise adjectives; 'narrow lanes' conveys the intended meaning. Suggestion: Replace unclear phrases with accurate adjectives/nouns such as 'narrow lanes' or 'small streets' and avoid repeating adjectives unnecessarily.

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country, instead scooters and two Wheelers are more popular in my country as my country has a very small areas and small looks and crooks where people can easily use their scooters and motorbikes.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country. Instead, scooters and two-wheelers are more popular because my country has very small areas and narrow lanes where people can easily use their scooters and motorbikes.

Errors: Run-on sentence with comma splice and repetitive phrases ('in my country' repeated). Reason: Break into two sentences and use conjunctions like 'because' for clarity. Suggestion: Split into two sentences and avoid unnecessary repetition; use conjunctions to show cause.