Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
I have another bike.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
I don't think so because sometimes some people buy buy a bike and riding a bike, but I'm not sure.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 回答が質問に直接答えておらず、時制も間違っています。まずは過去形で簡潔に主旨(はい/いいえ+所有の有無)を述べ、その後に1〜2文で補足(誰と乗っていたか、どんな思い出があるかなど)を加えてください。つなぎ言葉(例えば“when I was a child,” “also,” “sometimes”)を使うと自然になります。例:過去の事実→補足理由や具体例→結論の順で話すと良いです。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my sixth birthday. I used to ride it to the park with my older brother almost every weekend, and I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 答えが曖昧で根拠が弱く、語彙と文法の誤り(重複や時制)が目立ちます。まず断定か部分的な意見を明確に述べ、その後に具体的な理由や例を2文程度で示してください。接続詞(because, however, for example)を使って論理的に繋げ、語彙は“popular”, “common”, “commuters”, “leisure”など文脈に合う単語を選びましょう。
Exemplo: I think bikes are becoming more popular, but they are still not the main mode of transport. For example, some people use bicycles for leisure or short commutes in cities, and bike-sharing schemes have started appearing recently. However, most people still prefer cars or public transport for daily travel.
× I have another bike.
✓ I had another bike.
The examiner asked a question in the past tense ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student's answer should also be in the past tense to match the time frame. Use 'had' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: make sure to match the tense of the question or the time reference (e.g., 'I had another bike when I was a child.').
× I don't think so because sometimes some people buy buy a bike and riding a bike, but I'm not sure.
✓ I don't think so because sometimes people buy a bike and ride a bike, but I'm not sure.
There are multiple issues: a duplicated word ('buy buy'), inconsistent verb forms ('buy' then 'riding') and unnecessary 'some'. Use parallel verb forms for coordinated actions: 'buy' and 'ride'. Remove duplicate and the redundant 'some' before 'people'. Also keep present simple for general statements about habits. Suggestion: use 'people buy and ride bikes' or 'some people buy and ride bikes.'