Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No I didn't because when I was small I ride a bike and got hurt so I am afraid of riding bikes.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Of course, because almost everyone can ride bikes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 回答要直接并且语法正确,注意时态和句子结构;可以先用主题句回答问题,然后用一到两句具体说明原因和细节。使用连接词使表达更连贯。例如说明受伤的情形、年龄或是否后来改变想法。避免冗长或重复。
Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. When I was about six, I fell off a bike and badly scraped my knee, so I became frightened of riding. As a result, my parents didn't buy me a bicycle, and I preferred walking or playing other games.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 72.0Sugestão: 回答要更具体,用事实或对比来支持观点;可用连接词扩展一到两句,说明为什么普及(如交通、文化、经济等),并给出例子或个人观察。注意避免绝对化表述,比如“almost everyone”可改为更可证实的说法。
Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people commute to work or school by bicycle, and there are bike lanes in most cities, which makes cycling a common choice.
× No I didn't because when I was small I ride a bike and got hurt so I am afraid of riding bikes.
✓ No, I didn't, because when I was small I rode a bike and got hurt, so I have been afraid of riding bikes.
句子包含多个时态问题:既然回答第一句用的是过去时("I didn't"),后面描述过去的动作也应使用一般过去时(ride → rode)。此外,“so I am afraid of riding bikes”表示从过去到现在的持续状态,用现在完成时(have been afraid)更准确,表明从当时起一直到现在仍然害怕。建议在句内使用逗号分隔分句,并在"No"后加逗号以符合书面表达。
× Of course, because almost everyone can ride bikes.
✓ Of course, because almost everyone can ride a bike.
这里的名词搭配更自然用单数泛指一辆自行车:"ride a bike" 或者使用复数时要改为"ride bikes"也可,但在此语境下单数更常见、更地道。另外句子时态与情态动词"can"使用正确,无需改动时态。建议保持固定搭配"ride a bike"或使用"ride bikes"保持一致。