Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct past tense and articles, and give a concise, coherent answer with one topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details. Avoid contradictions (bike vs bicycle) and unclear phrases like “on my body.” Use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. Instead, I used my father’s bicycle sometimes, especially on weekends, because we lived near a park and it was a good way to spend time together.

Sugestão: Clarify and expand with specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Replace unclear phrase “by car very bubble.” Give one clear topic sentence and 1–2 specific supporting details (cost, traffic, environment).

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people choose bicycles because they are much cheaper to maintain than cars and they help avoid heavy traffic in cities.

× No, when I was a child I not have a bike, but I have a bicycle and I get there from my father and on my body.

✓ No, when I was a child I did not have a bike, but I had a bicycle that my father gave me and I carried it on my back.

Errors: incorrect negation 'I not have' instead of past negative (use 'did not' + base verb) and wrong pronoun/phrase 'get there from my father and on my body'. Also tense inconsistency: question asks about childhood (past). Correction uses past simple 'did not have' and 'had' and clarifies 'gave me' for 'get from', plus 'carried it on my back' for 'on my body'. Suggestion: use auxiliary 'did' for past simple negation, use proper verb 'give' in past 'gave' and express carrying with 'carry on my back'. Please review pronoun reference and choose clear verbs.

× Yes, by car very bubble.

✓ Yes, by car it is very busy.

Original is unclear and contains a wrong word 'bubble' and omitted subject. The speaker likely meant that car traffic is busy. Correction adds subject 'it' and uses adjective 'busy'. Suggestion: choose correct adjectives for traffic (busy, crowded) and include subject for clarity.

× In my country most people like to use bike because they are cheaper to use as compared to the cars.

✓ In my country most people like to use bikes because they are cheaper to use compared to cars.

Errors: singular/plural mismatch ('use bike' should be 'use bikes') and unnecessary definite article 'the cars'. Also awkward 'as compared to' phrase; 'compared to' is sufficient. Suggestion: ensure noun forms match ('bikes') and avoid unnecessary articles; use concise comparative phrases.