Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify tense and meaning, use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and word order, and keep it concise (max 5 sentences). For example, if you meant you did have a bicycle, say so and give a brief reason and one supporting detail with linking words. Pay attention to subject–verb agreement, past tense consistency, and sentence completeness.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to cycle every morning to keep fit, and this routine helped me build stamina. Moreover, cycling was my main way of getting to the local market and visiting friends.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (subject–verb agreement, tenses, articles), and organize supporting details with linking words (for example, moreover, because, for instance). Be specific about reasons and provide one or two concrete examples. Avoid repetition and unclear words.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to go to the market, and students often cycle to school. Moreover, cycling is popular for exercise, which adds to its widespread use.

× No, I didn't have bike when I am child because I have a bicycle by which I. Cycling every morning for my physical fitness.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I had a bicycle with which I cycled every morning for my physical fitness.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'bike' (Article errors, ID 22) and incorrect tense 'am child' should be past 'was a child' (Present tense issue, ID 6 -> Past tense issue, ID 5). Also 'I have a bicycle' conflicts with past timeframe, so change to past 'I had a bicycle' (Past tense issue). 'by which I. Cycling' is a sentence structure error and incorrect verb form: combine into 'with which I cycled' (verb tense and form corrected). Suggestion: keep past tense consistently when talking about childhood, use articles before singular countable nouns, and combine clauses into one complete sentence with a finite verb.

× Yes, I thinks bikes are popular in my country because it's became a basic need of every individual because each have their own way of importance of pipe in their life.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they have become a basic need for many people, and each person has their own reasons for the importance of a bike in their life.

Errors include third person singular verb 'thinks' which should be 'think' (Third person singular issue, ID 2). 'it's became' mixes present contraction with past tense; use present perfect 'have become' or past 'became' depending on meaning (Present tense issue ID 6 and Past tense issue ID 5). 'each have' should be 'each person has' (Incorrect use of pronouns/subject-verb agreement, IDs 12 and 27). 'importance of pipe' is likely a word choice error; replaced with 'importance of a bike' and added articles (Article errors, ID 22). Suggestion: match subject and verb number, choose consistent tense, and use clear nouns with correct articles.

× Someone use bike to go for their job and someone use it to go for their.

✓ Some people use bikes to go to work, and others use them to go to school or for other purposes.

Problems: 'Someone use' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use plural 'Some people use' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'use bike' needs article/plural 'use bikes' or 'use a bike' (Article errors, ID 22). 'to go for their job' is incorrect preposition and noun choice; use 'to go to work' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). The second clause 'someone use it to go for their' is incomplete and missing an object (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Suggestion: use plural subjects for general statements, correct prepositions ('to work', 'to school'), and complete the object of the verb.