Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and verb tense consistency, add a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and concise (max 5 sentences). For example, correct tense: use past simple consistently ('I rode'). Add a linking phrase ('In particular' or 'I remember') and a brief detail about why you were excited.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a small pink bike when I was a child. I was over the moon because I could ride it to my friends' houses and explore the neighbourhood. In particular, I remember learning to balance on weekends with my older brother, which made me feel very independent.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and provide specific reasons with linking words. Fix sentence fragments and remove duplicated phrases. Add one or two concrete examples or consequences to support your opinion (e.g., traffic, lack of bike lanes).

Exemplo: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars because roads are crowded and there are few bike lanes; as a result, cycling feels unsafe. For example, many commuters choose cars for convenience and to avoid getting stuck in traffic or bad weather.

× I was over the moon when I ride my bike around the town.

✓ I was over the moon when I rode my bike around the town.

The sentence describes a past feeling, so the verb in the time clause must be in past tense. 'Ride' is present tense; change to past tense 'rode' to match 'was'. Use consistent past tense for completed past events.

× I was over the moon when I rode my bike around the town.

✓ I was over the moon when I rode my bike around town.

The phrase 'around the town' is grammatical but non-idiomatic; native speakers typically say 'around town' without the definite article. Removing 'the' makes the expression more natural.

× People here actually prefer to use cars rather than riding bikes because they feel uncomfortable about riding bikes around the town because.

✓ People here actually prefer to use cars rather than ride bikes because they feel uncomfortable riding bikes around town.

When contrasting preferences with 'prefer ... rather than', use the base form of the verb after 'rather than' (prefer to use cars rather than ride bikes). Also avoid repeating 'because' at the end and remove the second 'the' in 'around town' for natural phrasing. Finally, 'feel uncomfortable about riding bikes' is wordy; 'feel uncomfortable riding bikes' is more concise and correct.