Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, uh), correct grammar (e.g., 'to the school' → 'to school'), and keep to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail (age or frequency) and a brief reason for stopping to use a bike. Use linking words (and, so, but) correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I rode a bicycle from about age seven to twelve to get to elementary school and to my soccer training. However, I rarely cycle now because I mostly use public transport or a car for convenience.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear opinion, avoid repetition and fillers, and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'while' to connect opinion and reason. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., 'prevalent', 'predominant'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer trains or cars for longer commutes. While cycling is common in some parks or suburbs, it isn't a predominant mode of daily transport in cities.

× I used to commute, uh, the school, elementary school and then like, uh, my soccer training session by bicycle, by bike.

✓ I used to commute to the elementary school and then to my soccer training sessions by bicycle.

The original sentence is missing the preposition 'to' after 'commute' and has awkward noun phrases and punctuation. Use 'commute to' for movement toward a place, include 'the' before 'elementary school' if referring to a specific school, and pluralize 'session' to match repeated activity. Also choose a single phrasing ('by bicycle').

× So yeah, I used to have an but now I'm not kid anymore, so I don't use cycle.

✓ So yeah, I used to have one, but now I'm not a kid anymore, so I don't use a bicycle.

Multiple issues: 'have an' is incomplete and needs a noun ('one' or 'a bicycle'); 'I'm not kid' lacks the article 'a'; 'use cycle' is nonstandard—use 'use a bicycle'. This correction fixes article use and produces a grammatically complete sentence.

× I really I use.

✓ I don't really use it anymore.

The original is an incomplete fragment and unclear. It needs a negation to match the prior idea and an object pronoun 'it' referring to the bicycle. 'Anymore' clarifies current habit. This yields a full grammatical sentence.

× I'm not sure about exactly about exactly, but I don't think so 'cause, you know, it's more common to have a no, it's more common to move, travel by train and a car.

✓ I'm not exactly sure, but I don't think so, because it's more common to travel by train or by car.

The original repeats 'about exactly' and mixes phrases awkwardly. Use 'I'm not exactly sure' and replace colloquial filler with 'because'. Use 'travel' with preposition 'by' and choose 'or' to list alternatives. Remove 'have a no' which is ungrammatical.

× I would say it's, uh, not common to have a bicycle.

✓ I would say it's not common to have a bicycle.

This sentence mainly needs removal of filler 'uh' and extra commas. Grammatically correct but ensure concise speech. The structure 'not common to have a bicycle' is fine; no preposition change required beyond keeping it simple.