Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is largely off-topic and contains unclear and incorrect phrases (e.g. "did not ever die", "get saved in presidency university"). Stay focused on the question: give a clear, direct topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two relevant supporting details with linking words. Use simple, correct vocabulary and avoid unrelated plans or confusing expressions. Aim for 2–4 short sentences, use linking words like "because" or "so", and be specific (age, reason).

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents wanted me to focus on my studies, so they didn’t buy one for me. As a result, I usually walked to school or took the bus with my friends.

Sugestão: This answer is closer to the question but is informal and slightly repetitive. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples, using linking words such as "because", "for example", or "also". Correct grammar (e.g. "are very popular", "young people") and avoid hedging like "hopefully" when you can give a reasoned view. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many young people follow motorcycle trends on social media and often buy sports or super bikes to show their style.

× No, when I was a child I did not ever die since I was concentrating on my studies and my parents focused me on that and said to get saved in presidency university for the engineering and I'm planning to do masters in abroad.

✓ No, when I was a child I never had a bike because I was concentrating on my studies; my parents focused me on that and told me to get admitted to Presidency University for engineering, and I'm planning to do a master's abroad.

Multiple past-tense and word-choice errors: 'did not ever die' is incorrect and should be 'never had a bike' to match meaning (past possession). Use 'because' to give a reason. 'Focused me on that' is incorrect; better: 'my parents focused on my studies' or 'my parents encouraged me to focus on my studies.' 'Said to get saved in presidency university' is wrong word choice and structure; use 'told me to get admitted to Presidency University.' 'Masters in abroad' needs correct article/structure: 'a master's abroad.' Suggestions: use simple past for events in childhood, choose correct verbs for possession ('have' for possession), use 'admitted to' for university entry, and use 'a master's' for the degree.

× Hopefully yes since I have less knowledge about bikes but content which I scroll on social media.

✓ I think so, although I have little knowledge about bikes except for the content I see on social media.

Tense and word-choice issues: 'Hopefully yes' is informal and awkward; 'I think so' fits conversational context. 'I have less knowledge' should be 'I have little knowledge' (quantifier usage). 'But content which I scroll on social media' is ungrammatical; use 'except for the content I see on social media.' Use present simple 'see' for habitual action.

× The bikes in my country is very popular and the youths are going crazy about bike super bikes and all.

✓ Bikes in my country are very popular, and young people are going crazy about superbikes and similar models.

Subject-verb agreement: 'The bikes ... is' is incorrect; plural subject 'bikes' requires 'are.' 'The youths' is awkward; use 'young people.' Redundant and incorrect phrase 'bike super bikes and all' should be 'superbikes and similar models.' Also adjust word order and articles for natural English.