Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve tense consistency, reduce redundancy, and add a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense for past habits, combine short sentences, and add a linking word for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it in elementary school and rode it to school almost every weekday, which helped me feel independent and fit.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and grammar errors, use plural agreement, and add a specific reason or example. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with a brief reason and an example using a linking word for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many children and adults use them for short trips; for example, most kids ride to school or to the park daily.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use the past tense. Using present tense 'have' is incorrect here. Use 'had' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time reference in the question; when asked about past experiences, use past simple verbs (I had).

× From what I remember it was when I was in elementary.

✓ From what I remember, it was when I was in elementary school.

The main issue is omission of the noun 'school' after 'elementary' and a missing comma after the introductory phrase. Also this sentence refers to a past time so past phrasing is fine. Add 'school' to make the phrase natural and include a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: Add the noun 'school' after 'elementary' and punctuate introductory phrases with a comma for clarity.

× I use it every day when I go to school and during weekdays.

✓ I used it every day when I went to school on weekdays.

The student is describing habitual actions in the past (when they were a child), so verbs should be in simple past ('used', 'went'). Also 'during weekdays' is better expressed as 'on weekdays' for habitual routines. Suggestion: When describing past habits, use past simple and say 'on weekdays' rather than 'during weekdays.'

× In my country most child children use bikes every day.

✓ In my country most children use bikes every day.

The phrase 'child children' is redundant and incorrect. The correct plural form is 'children.' Also include a comma after 'country' if needed for clarity. Suggestion: Use the correct plural 'children' and avoid repeating words; ensure subject matches plural verb usage.