Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. For example, say you had a bike, explain briefly why you didn't learn (mention attempts and who taught you), and finish with a short reflection or consequence. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. However, I never learned to ride it because I found balancing difficult and my father’s attempts to teach me were unsuccessful. As a result, the bike was mostly kept in the garage and I used it only as a prop.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: give a clear opinion, provide two specific reasons, and use linking words. Correct grammar ("interested in", "safe roads for cyclists"). Be specific about why cars are preferred and about infrastructure problems. Keep it to 2–4 sentences maximum.

Exemplo: Not really — cars are much more popular in my country because people value convenience and public transport is limited. In addition, there are few dedicated bike lanes and the roads are often unsafe for cyclists, so many people avoid riding bikes.

× Yes I did, but I never get to got to ride it 'cause I couldn't learn and my father wasn't successful teaching me how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I did, but I never got to ride it because I couldn't learn, and my father wasn't successful in teaching me how to ride a bike.

Mixed and incorrect past tense forms: 'get to got to' is wrong; use simple past 'got to' to match 'did'. Also 'cause' should be written as 'because' in formal speech and add commas for clarity. Use 'successful in teaching' to form the correct adjective + preposition pattern.

× People tend to use their personal cars and they usually are not interested into riding a bike.

✓ People tend to use their personal cars and they usually are not interested in riding a bike.

The correct preposition with 'interested' is 'in', not 'into'. 'Interested in doing something' is the correct collocation.

× Plus my country doesn't offer a great saved at doesn't offer uh, safe Rd. roads for biker.

✓ Plus, my country doesn't offer safe roads for bikers.

The original sentence has garbled words and repetition ('offer a great saved at doesn't offer uh, safe Rd.'). Simplify to 'doesn't offer safe roads for bikers'. Use plural 'bikers' and remove filler words; 'safe roads' is clear and grammatical.