Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, use correct tense consistency and grammar, and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and limit to 2–4 sentences. Use past simple for past events and correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘tricycle’ or ‘four-wheeled bike’, ‘two-wheeled bike’).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. At first I rode a four-wheeled tricycle, but after I learned to balance, my father gave me a two-wheeled bicycle, so I owned both types during my childhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct word choice, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., ‘because’, ‘so’, ‘for example’). Use present simple for general facts. Improve coherence by removing repeated phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people prefer short, convenient trips to nearby shops. For example, families often ride bikes for errands since it is quicker than walking and cheaper than driving.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and at 1st I have a four wheel bike but later when I am good at riding a bicycle my father gave me a 2 wheel bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. At first I had a four-wheel bike, but later, when I became good at riding a bicycle, my father gave me a two-wheel bike.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses (have/am) while the context is past. Use past tense consistently: 'had' and 'became' instead of 'have' and 'am'. Also use 'at first' instead of 'at 1st' and hyphenate compound adjectives like 'four-wheel' and 'two-wheel'. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× So I have two bikes when I was a child.

✓ So I had two bikes when I was a child.

The clause 'when I was a child' requires past tense. 'Have' should be changed to past 'had' for consistency. Maintain past tense throughout the sentence.

× Yes, I think bags are very popular in my country because we often went to the store that is near our house and we are lazy to walk so we always often we often ride bicycles to get to the store.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because we often went to the store near our house and were too lazy to walk, so we often rode bicycles to get there.

Multiple issues: 'bags' is likely a typo; context indicates 'bicycles'. Tense consistency: use past tense 'went','were','rode' because speaker describes habitual past actions. Remove repeated 'we often' and streamline phrases. Use 'too lazy to walk' rather than 'are lazy to walk'. Also replace 'to the store' repetition with 'there' for concision.