Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak in past tense consistently, use a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and redundancy, and add one or two specific details. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences. For example, say you had a bike, who bought it, why you used it, and one brief memory or detail about riding it.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me to ride the two-kilometre distance to primary school. I used it almost every day, and I remember racing my friends on the way home.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct opinion, use clearer reasons and linking words, avoid vague phrases and repetition. Provide one or two specific reasons (e.g., good public transport, safety issues) and a short example. Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer fast public transport like buses and the metro, and many cities lack safe bike lanes. For example, my city has frequent buses and few dedicated cycling paths, so people usually choose public transit instead.

× Yes, I have a bike just in my, uh, primary school and my daddy, my father, he buy a bike for me to go to school 'cause we have a just like 2 kilometer destination. Did I go to school?

✓ Yes, I had a bike only during my primary school, and my father bought a bike for me to go to school because our school was only about 2 kilometers away.

Multiple problems: wrong tense (present 'have' should be past 'had') and incorrect past participle/verb form ('buy' should be past 'bought'). The clause 'just in my primary school' is awkward and should be 'only during my primary school'. 'Daddy, my father, he buy' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'my father bought'. 'Did I go to school?' is irrelevant and likely an attempt to confirm; remove or replace with a clear statement. Suggestion: Use past simple for past events, use correct past forms of irregular verbs, and simplify redundant phrases.

× Actually I don't think it's a popular thing in my country because just in like a transport, people always will choose the call and just like immediate underground bus and just allows people with just bike to just like they walk.

✓ Actually I don't think bikes are popular in my country because for transportation, people usually choose cars or the subway, and there are few places where people can use bikes, so many people walk instead.

Problems include incorrect phrasing and tense/auxiliary misuse: 'it's a popular thing' is awkward—use 'bikes are popular'. 'Just in like a transport' is ungrammatical; use 'for transportation'. 'People always will choose the call' mixes words and tense; use 'people usually choose cars'. 'Immediate underground bus' likely means 'subway' or 'underground', so use 'the subway'. 'Just allows people with just bike to just like they walk' is unclear and ungrammatical; convey idea clearly: 'there are few places for bikes, so many people walk'. Suggestion: Use simple present for general truths, choose precise vocabulary (car, subway), avoid filler words like 'just' and 'like'.

× So I think bike is not popular.

✓ So I think bikes are not popular.

Subject-verb agreement and article/number: 'bike is not popular' treats 'bike' singular in a general statement. Use plural 'bikes are not popular' when talking about the general popularity of bicycles. Alternatively, 'the bike is not popular' would refer to a specific bike. Suggestion: Use plural nouns with plural verbs for generalizations about a class of things.