Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap doğrudan ama dilbilgisi hatalı ve doğal değil. Geçmişte sahip olma durumunu anlatırken doğru zaman kullandığınızdan emin olun (simple past). Ayrıca daha doğal ve zengin bir cevap için kısa bir konu cümlesi kurup 1-2 destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Bağlaçları kullanarak akışı iyileştirin (for example, because, so). Cümle sayısını 2–3 ile sınıırlandırın ve gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to a nearby park every weekend because it was the easiest way to get some exercise and meet my friends.

Sugestão: Cevabınız net ama eksik ve birkaç dilbilgisi ile kelime seçimi hatası var. Olumsuz görüş bildirirken nedenini belirtin ve daha spesifik örnekler verin. 'So much' kullanımı yerine 'many' veya 'a lot of' gibi uygun ifadeler kullanın; 'drawing park' yanlış ifadedir — muhtemelen 'in parks' veya 'riding in parks' demek istediniz. Cümleleri bağlamak için 'because' veya 'for example' kullanın.

Exemplo: Not really. I don't see many people cycling in my city because the roads are often busy and there are few dedicated bike lanes, so most people prefer using cars or buses.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence uses present tense 'have' with a past time marker 'when I was a child', which is inconsistent. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time. Suggestion: Use past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past (I had, I lived, I played).

× No, I don't think so. I don't see so much people drawing park.

✓ No, I don't think so. I don't see so many people visiting the park.

Multiple issues: 'so much people' is incorrect quantifier use with countable noun 'people' — use 'so many'. 'Drawing park' is an incorrect verb/preposition choice; likely intended 'in the park' or 'visiting the park'. Also 'I don't see' is present simple which can be acceptable, but better to say 'I don't see many people in the park' or 'I don't see so many people visiting the park'. Suggestion: Use 'so many' with plural countable nouns and use correct verb phrases and prepositions ('in the park', 'visiting the park').