Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct at the start and avoid unnecessary contrast that confuses the timeline. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (e.g., how you used it or a memory). Reduce filler words and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used it every day to ride to my friend’s house and to explore the neighbourhood, which helped me gain confidence and independence.

Sugestão: Use accurate vocabulary (avoid 'infamous' which has negative meaning) and organise ideas with linking words. Start with a direct answer, then give two specific reasons (e.g., climate and cost) using connectors like 'because' and 'moreover'. Remove fillers and keep to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because the mild climate makes cycling comfortable for most of the year. Moreover, they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances in busy cities.

× I'm not a very big fan of two Wheelers now, but I was very fond of bikes when I was a kid, so yes, I did have a bike.

✓ I'm not a big fan of two-wheelers now, but I was very fond of bikes when I was a kid, so yes, I did have a bike.

Use 'a big fan' not 'a very big fan' is acceptable but 'very' is unnecessary; primary issue is capitalization and hyphenation: 'two-wheelers' should be lowercase and hyphenated as a compound noun. Keep tense consistent: present 'I'm' and past 'was' are correct. Suggestion: write 'two-wheelers' in lowercase and hyphenated to be grammatically correct and natural.

× I would say yes, bikes are really infamous in my country because of the weather.

✓ I would say yes, bikes are really popular in my country because of the weather.

'Infamous' means famous for a bad reason and is the wrong adjective here. The intended meaning is 'popular'. Replace 'infamous' with 'popular' to convey the correct idea. Also keep 'really' as an adverb modifying the adjective 'popular'.

× Umm, it is very reliable umm source of transportation.

✓ Umm, it is a very reliable source of transportation.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very reliable source'. Word order should be 'a very reliable source of transportation'. Suggest adding the article and placing 'very' before the adjective for correct noun phrase structure.

× Because it's not umm, cold all the time and it's not even hot all year around.

✓ Because it's not cold all the time and it's not hot all year round.

Use 'all year round' (not 'around') as the correct idiom. Remove unnecessary commas and filler 'umm'. The present tense contractions 'it's' are fine. Suggest using 'all year round' for natural English.

× So yes, people can comfortably ride bikes.

✓ So yes, people can comfortably ride bikes.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It fits the present ability/modal sense. Keep word order and adverb placement as is.