Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, clarity and relevance. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (use 'had' for past) and remove confusing phrases like 'sealed bike.' For example, mention who gave it to you, how old you were, or a memorable ride.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. For example, my parents bought it for me when I was eight, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

Sugestão: Make a clear, complete opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use correct grammar and linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however', 'for example'). Replace unclear phrases like 'quick for fuller' with concrete reasons such as convenience, low cost, or health benefits. Limit to up to five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are an economical and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or school in busy city areas, and cycling is also encouraged for health and environmental reasons.

× Yes, I have a bicycle when I was a sealed bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child.

Grammar problem type ID:5 and 26. The student used present tense 'have' with a past time clause 'when I was...' which is incorrect; past tense 'had' is required for consistency. The phrase 'sealed bike' is meaningless here and likely a wrong word choice; 'child' fits the examiner's question. Suggestion: use past simple for past situations (I had) and choose words that match meaning ('child').

× Yes, bicycle are quick for fuller.

✓ Yes, bicycles are quick and more convenient for travel.

Grammar problem type ID:1 and 13 and 26. The student used the singular noun 'bicycle' with the plural verb 'are' causing agreement mismatch; use plural 'bicycles' with 'are'. The phrase 'quick for fuller' is ungrammatical and unclear. I corrected to 'quick and more convenient for travel' to convey likely intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches verb and choose appropriate adjectives and objects to express the idea (e.g., quick for commuting/travel).