Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., use 'really into' not 'huge on', remove repeated words), and limit to up to 5 sentences. Use linking words (for example, 'and' or 'which') and give one or two specific supporting details (when you rode, whom you rode with, or a brief example of a memory). Also fix verb forms and plural/singular (friends).

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I was really into riding my bicycle as a child and often rode it to meet friends or go to the park. Also, I would ride alone in the evenings to get exercise and clear my mind, which always helped lift my mood and relax me.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and follow with 1–2 specific reasons, using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unfinished sentences. Use proper verb forms and articles (e.g., 'more people prefer riding bicycles as exercise', 'the government encourages the public'). Add a concrete example or short statistic if possible to strengthen the answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming very popular in my country. More people prefer riding bicycles for exercise and short commutes, and the government encourages cycling by building bike lanes and running public campaigns to reduce carbon emissions.

× I was really huge on riding bicycle at that time.

✓ I was really keen on riding bicycles at that time.

The adjective 'huge' is incorrect to express strong interest; 'keen' or 'really into' are appropriate. Also 'bicycle' should be plural or 'the bicycle' depending on context; 'riding bicycles' or 'riding my bike' is natural. Suggest replacing 'huge' with 'keen' or 'really into' and use plural or possessive form.

× So in my childhood I used used to ride bike to to hang out with my friend and do some exercise alone that can help me to improve, lift up my mood and help me relax.

✓ So in my childhood I used to ride my bike to hang out with my friends and to exercise alone, which helped me improve, lift my mood, and relax.

Errors include repeated 'used', duplicated 'to', missing possessive 'my', singular 'friend' should be plural when unspecified, and wrong clause structure. 'Used to' correctly expresses past habitual action. Use 'to' before verbs consistently. Use relative pronoun 'which' and past tense 'helped' to match past context. Also 'lift up my mood' is better as 'lift my mood'.

× There are more and more people prefer riding bicycle as a exercise and the government encourage public to ride more bicycle for commuting or exercising because that can reduce the carbon dioxide emission so if people use that method to.

✓ There are more and more people preferring to ride bicycles for exercise, and the government encourages the public to ride more bicycles for commuting or exercise because this can reduce carbon dioxide emissions.

Multiple issues: verb form after 'people' should be 'preferring' or 'who prefer' to match structure; 'bicycle' should be plural; 'a exercise' incorrect article; 'government encourage' needs third-person singular 'encourages'; 'public' requires 'the' before it; 'that can reduce the carbon dioxide emission' should be 'this can reduce carbon dioxide emissions' and sentence fragment 'so if people use that method to' is incomplete and removed. Use plural nouns and correct verb agreement.